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An Eclipseverse story almost entirely written at the last minute for Chengar Qordath's Cloud Kicker shipfic contest.

Lt. Twilight Sparkle and weather manager Cloud Kicker have been dating for several months now. More than friends, but with a relationship complicated by Cloud's free-spirited promiscuity, the two of them have nevertheless managed to find an equilibrium that works for them both.

That equilibrium may end up toppling over, however, because Twilight harbors a desire that may just throw everything they know and hold dear about each other into question.

She wants to introduce Cloud to her parents.

(Rated Teen for light suggestiveness.)

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Is this canon? I just wanted to know before I go in.

"So then my other question. When we see your brother tomorrow...?"
"Yeah?" She furrows her brow, trying to figure out where I'm going with this.
"... Do you think you could ask him which of us was better in bed? Me or Cadance?"
I have a very hard time keeping myself from busting into laughter, her jaw drops so fast. "W-what?! I can't ask that!"
"Oh come onnnnn," I whine, before breaking out into a snicker-fit. "How often does a mare get to find out how they rank against the bucking Alicorn of Love? And I can't ask, myself, that'd be awkward!"

Worth reading it just for this part.

6382908 Well, I hope not just for that part, but thanks, I thoroughly enjoyed getting to use that joke. :rainbowlaugh:

This was a story about a weird, messy relationship between two very, very different people. And despite how complicated it feels to them, or how unlikely it seems that they'll stay together, it just works. Because no matter how freakishly loose Cloudkicker acts, or how genuinely insane Twilight Sparkle is, they respect, trust, and above all else, adore each other.

Before I read this story, I was worried about what it would mean for the Eclipseverse, and now that I've actually given it a chance, I'm ashamed to have ever doubted you. Their relationship is beautiful, and the series would be less without it. Thank you for another great story, and keep up the good work.

6383705 Well I'm very glad that you gave it a chance. Don't feel bad about doubting me, though. I certainly did. :twilightsheepish: But in a way, putting it off until right before the deadline worked in the story's favor because there was no way that I could give it a neat, tidy little ending, even if I wanted to.

And when it all comes down to it, this isn't that kind of story. It's not about getting Twilight's parents to approve of the relationship so much as it's just about sharing that aspect of her life with her family, warts and all. So thank you very much for enjoying it, and really getting what I was going for here. :twilightsmile:

A very enjoyable little addition to the Eclipseverse. Great job.:pinkiehappy::derpytongue2::moustache:

good story, I had half expect cloud kicker to end up being Candace in disguised for some odd reason

8165265
Ha, now that would be a twist. But no, Cadance's rebound is going to be a little different.

Incidentally, as a fan of oversized boobs, I have to give props to your avatar icon.

8165321 heheheh it of my wow toon, but my oc is about that size but is a demon pony,
good story it made me smile

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