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Over all, not bad, but it could use more descriptions (said the guy that sucks at descriptions).
6382853 I... need to pay more attention and reread more than just once... and reread slower . Thanks for bringing this up, as small as it is, it's still an issue.
Oh...I'm sure he's being an obtuse little bugger like always.
6384399 Dammit !... Thanks for uh.. letting me know though .
Why is this under rule63? I mean it's a nice story, but I can't find the reason for that label. Did I miss it?
6432781 Nor... do I . Spike certainly has no vagina, nor does Flutters have a peepee. I guess a member of Rule 63 put it in, cause I can guarantee Spike is a man.
i feel an urge to write a followup to this where spike and fluttershy learn he got her pregnant. Damn it!
6459311 Heheh, I'm not complaining. Glad to know you liked it enough to continue it, really makes writing these worth while. Just so long as it doesn't result in pregnancy sex .
6459336 oh god, you had to put that image in my head didn't you
Alright, before I read: is Spike still a dragon in this? Cause that would be hawt.
EDIT: you know, I really need to check the groups before I ask these questions… saves a lot of time.
RE-EDIT: although I guess the groups aren't always reliable.
6783134 I most certainly agree. Though I believe the only reason it is actually in the Dragon club is just because Spike is in it. However, Rule 63 I do not understand .