The Cakes got an order for a certain treat, one of the ingredients calls for a certain berry, and is known to grow only on the Everfree Forest. Pinkie gladly agrees to fetch the berries, and decides to take a break while she's there. Though strange things begin to happen, she decides to end her break early and goes back to the Bakery, until she is stopped by a strangely comical hooded skeleton.
Got the cover pic from the Tumblr Page here.
An Undertale & MLP mashup. Contains crappy puns and minor spooks.
Chapters (1)
10/10
Needs more puns. roundstable.com/forums/images/smilies/pinkie_p.png
Uh, Sans, I think you got horses and giraffes mixed up there, buddy.
luv it!
6637649 I'll admit the joke I attempted there was rather subtle, I was making Sans screw around with Papyrus when eh told him that, hence the wink.
Other than more puns pretty good.
Wait a minute...Pinkie didn't have a bad time! Why?!
6638149 Cause she's not a dirty brother killer
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6638513 But...but...then Sans should tell her that she's gonna have a good time...
Sans is hilalrious.
A pity this is a one shot. This is good
Love it, 10/10
*are
But otherwise, as a person who regularly writes a pun column for my high school's newspaper, I found it enjoyable. Nice job!
6640089 Thanks for the catch, as minor as it is it can draw the reader from the passage, the opposite of immerse (If I knew the word for the opposite of immerse
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As a reward, here's a cookie: grit.com/~/media/Images/GRT/Editorial/Articles/Magazine%20Articles/2013/01-01/Oatmeal%20Raisin%20Cookies%20Recipe/Oatmeal-Raisin-Cookies.jpg
They're raisin, no chocolate chip for you
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No chocolate chip? I be raisin a complaint here!
6640444 GAAAAH!
Well I like it, because I like Undertale, but there is not much to read, and nearly everything was about what I already saw at Undertale, but my main point is, it was to short.
Sorry, but I don´t really want to give an upvote this time.
6643009 I understand, there's a lot of other Undertale stuff on this website, this is just another light read and nothing too special. Thanks for reading regardless though man. I just have one question for you though...
DOES SPIDUR HAV TEH PUSSPUSS?
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I always tried to understand that part the right way, but I´m still not sure if I really understood it. Till now I think I got three versions of this joke, but maybe it was just me translating it wrong.
6643067 Tbh I never understood either, but it's just such a strange question that it makes it laughable. That and it's kinda funny imagining a bug/ insect's genitalia I guess... It's not like I'm... Into bugs or anything...
Goddamnit. I only came here to see a Spooky Scary Skeletons joke.
Nevermind
6643440 will this do?
6644032
No.
Besides, I fail to see the appeal.
6644032 I liked it
Also liked the story
This was a good story, no bones about it. Sorry, had to try.
But for reals, this fic was great. Short and sweet.
I hope I'm not the only one who heard sans and Papyrus' speech noises. I love these baby bones.
6680507 YAY! ok. LETS BULLY HYPER MIND AND STEAL HIS LUNCH MONEY! heh
This was super cute~
6683262 Thank you for the kind words
, it's comments like this that keep me going. Leaving a comments may take a little out of your life, but it'll brighten up someone else's.
I fucking love Sans!
Gotta love those skellingtons.
While just the bare bones of a story, it was still quite enjoyable. If it were fleshed out a bit, it could be a real page turner.
6706502 I gotta remember to come to your for puns next time
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oh my god, i just realized...
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see that jacket? minus the zipper, and few differently colourd parts, it looks pradicatilly identical to another pun spewing person...
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coincidence?
I THINK NOT
6706745 In response to this Illuminati-skeleton based conspiracy theory:
this needs another chapter
Suddenly, I need to see them having a pun war. I just really do.
Oh, come on. It wasn't that bad. It was pretty funny.
Lolz
6706745 at least sans' jokes are funny.
I think this was a very funny little story
Short, but sweet
6644055 Come on... Throw the writer a bone! Tibia honest you're coming out cold as a skeleton!
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Bonetrousle was literally the only good thing to come out of Undertale in my opinion.
7151479 And I thought sans was heartless. You have to admit this is at least a little humerus! Maybe toby should have put a little more backbone into the game! I guess his heart just wasn't in it!
7151479 Whoa! I didn't expect that opinion at all.
I've actually never seen anyone yet who has experienced Undertale and disliked it that way. There's a first time for everything I suppose. 
Kind of nice, but kind of 'meh.' It made me smile enough to get a like.
This is actually one of the better ones I've read! You came up with this in minutes! I'm impressed!
Actually pinkie, if you said you chatted with some skeletons, they might actually believe you