Comments ( 15 )

Nice enough clop, if a bit cliche. I was hoping that this was going to be a fic about my fetish, but my search continues.

Aww, touching story and some clop to end it.
Good job FallBlau.

7372429 Imgur links do not work on Fimfiction.

7373076 You just click the link and the GIF appears.

I don't see it either.

I laughed so hard when my imagination gave me this image.

“Twilight, are you alright?” Twilight asked concerned

It killed my boner but it was worth it. Great story friend!

7373264 ....Dang it. Thanks for pointing that out friend. :p

7373294 no problem. Always game to read a well written spilight!

7373307 Awww, that made my day. Thank you! :pinkiehappy:

This was a nice romance clop story. :twilightsmile:

rarity got cucked rip

It's good, but at lines like:

She had been responsible for other pony’s lives before

You admire her, because she’s a mare of refinement.

... you might want to keep it consistent if you're going for a humanized story.
Other than that I quite like it. :pinkiesmile:

Very good.

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