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6245611 Get ready. Cuz sex is about to go down.
Looks like things are already about to get fun~
Immediately gives 10/10, going to recommend to friends!
6245704 YAY! Mind adding spoiler tags to that quote slave?
6245714 I shall do what you say, master!
6245719 Master Senpai notices and appreciates your effort!
6245615 a3.files.biography.com/image/upload/c_fill,cs_srgb,dpr_1.0,g_face,h_300,q_80,w_300/MTE1ODA0OTcxNTkzNzk1MDg1.jpg
Hmmm...shex.
Not usually into mature-rated things, but I'll give it a like and a fave to see where it goes.
Wait so it's gonna be stallion on stallion sex?
6245974 Yeah.
6245976 oh boy I've never read one of these
6245983 There's a first time for everything.
6245987 well when it's done I will definitely read it
It was alright.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
6248847 Oh, you know it!
Uh, I'm pretty sure this doesn't belong in the filly foolers group, as it's intended for f/f romance.
6249316 Sorry, I wasn't sure what the group was for I'll take it down.
Oh god no.
I told you not to do this. Please, there's still a chance to turn back. Don't do this. While I like Mind Control and acknowledge there are some dark aspects to it, there are some lines that shouldn't be crossed.
This is one of them.
Pure garbage, Downvoted.
6250367 Why is it pure garbage?
He's so screwed. *BA bum tish* Joking aside, this looks good so far. Keep up the good work!
*Sees tags*
*Sees what's coming in the second chapter*
Ahahahahahahahahaha- No. Your tags are so wrong, fix it.
Really? You're fucking going there?
6256502 Had to with all the Apple incest fics out there.
6256529
Not necessarily. Eh, it's not the main focus, so I won't bother with it.
6256606 Just a little inside joke.
6256529 You really didn't. It just makes Braeburn kinda creepy.
6257262 Well he is about to hypnotize and rape Monotone so... Yeah.
6256529
There is so much, so much here you did not have to do and still are.
Please stop. I am seriously becoming upset by this fiction.
6258432
Well... He got banned, same with his alt. So I'm guessing he angered somebody to the point of reporting him.
6260952
6258432
I'm back now tho.
6261677
Good. Now stop this before someone gets really upset.
6262209 I'm going to write what I want, I don't care who I offend. You don't have to read it.
I like it!! Keep it up :)
6262209
If you don't like it, just ignore it.
Do continue this, Ah'm finding it nice enough so far :3 just ignore all the fussy people.
I defiantly want to read more of this story. Monotone seem like the classical coward colt that hasn't really grown up just yet. I hope it will continue soon.
Also, I wander if Monotone, is more like his dad than he thinks. For what I can see his fathers seem to be completely subservient to his tyrannical wife and doesn't seem to question or challenge that she has taken way his command of the house from him. I wander if in a subconsciousness he like being submissive and obedience to her whims, and being depraved of making choices himself seem is part of arousal to him as stressful. Of course, it could also simply be that his father simply has no backbone.
For what it seems to me, Monotone like being under control by others, or not being in control of himself, and his arousal on stage shows that, I wander if it also helps him to forget about his anxieties of that seem to be related about him making indecisions for himself.
I hope Braeburn will abused the hypnotism to its fullest, and make Monotone question is sexuality with out realizing that he is being used.
6524423 Sorry about the wait, next chapter should be out in a few days :)
6741375 great to hear that
Three weeks is a few days?
6805935 Sorry about that, I had some issues with the desktop computer at home. I didn't mean to make a false promise :(
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6524423
Next chapter is out now. Life often interferes with my writing... I'll try not to make promises I can't keep.
6806369 great to hear it i an starting to read it as we peak.
6806376 Sorry about that... forgot to publish it.
Well it was a little short in my opinion and it cut's off right a the good part, but still it was good. We see more of Braeburn's weird incestuous relation with his family and is, I am not sure if Braeburn is genuinely concern for monotone or not... probably not. I can't wait to see the next one
6806513 Yeah... sorry about that. I'm used to writing short chapters because before I never really had much time to write. I'll try to write longer chapters in the future.