"Cousins, uncles, grandfathers, brothers, if there's a male relative of mine I've bucked 'em pretty hard." Braeburn said pridefully. "Us apples are known for inbreeding. It's why our family is so big."

Really? You're fucking going there?

6256502 Had to with all the Apple incest fics out there.

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Not necessarily. Eh, it's not the main focus, so I won't bother with it.

6256606 Just a little inside joke.

6256529 You really didn't. It just makes Braeburn kinda creepy.

6257262 Well he is about to hypnotize and rape Monotone so... Yeah.

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There is so much, so much here you did not have to do and still are.
Please stop. I am seriously becoming upset by this fiction.

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Well... He got banned, same with his alt. So I'm guessing he angered somebody to the point of reporting him.

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I'm back now tho.

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Good. Now stop this before someone gets really upset.

6262209 I'm going to write what I want, I don't care who I offend. You don't have to read it.

I like it!! Keep it up :)

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If you don't like it, just ignore it.

Do continue this, Ah'm finding it nice enough so far :3 just ignore all the fussy people.

I defiantly want to read more of this story. Monotone seem like the classical coward colt that hasn't really grown up just yet. I hope it will continue soon.

Also, I wander if Monotone, is more like his dad than he thinks. For what I can see his fathers seem to be completely subservient to his tyrannical wife and doesn't seem to question or challenge that she has taken way his command of the house from him. I wander if in a subconsciousness he like being submissive and obedience to her whims, and being depraved of making choices himself seem is part of arousal to him as stressful. Of course, it could also simply be that his father simply has no backbone.

For what it seems to me, Monotone like being under control by others, or not being in control of himself, and his arousal on stage shows that, I wander if it also helps him to forget about his anxieties of that seem to be related about him making indecisions for himself.

I hope Braeburn will abused the hypnotism to its fullest, and make Monotone question is sexuality with out realizing that he is being used.

6524423 Sorry about the wait, next chapter should be out in a few days :)

6741375 great to hear that

Three weeks is a few days?

6805935 Sorry about that, I had some issues with the desktop computer at home. I didn't mean to make a false promise :(

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Next chapter is out now. Life often interferes with my writing... I'll try not to make promises I can't keep.

6806369 great to hear it i an starting to read it as we peak.

6806376 Sorry about that... forgot to publish it.