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Pixel Berry
Friendship is born at the moment when one person says to another: "What! You too! I thought I was the only one."
Pixel Berry
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Oooh, that sounds like fun!
6276922 I know right, I think Imma have a chapter where he runs though Skyrim XD
This chapter, this chapter. It makes me feel the need tp buy ythqt gam. I so want that game and this chalter only increased this. Good chaptrr though.
This chapter, this chapter. It makes me feel the need tp buy ythqt gam. I so want that game and this chalter only increased this. Good chaptrr though.
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Oh, wow, sorry I didn't see this sooner! Thank you, it was a lot of fun writing the chapter.
I'm glad to have taken part in this project. Keep up the good work =)
No offense, but this chapter needs a little revising. There're a few grammatical errors, but the main problem is the fact that Spike doesn't say anything. If he's not going to bother contribute anything in this chapter, then what's the point in having him in the first place? (Again, not meaning any offense, just thought I'd just give a little advice.)
Alright, I get the message :p
I'm working on the second half of mine :p
Though, I really wanted it a two parter >.<
I'm glad you liked and used the Cover I made for you Pixel and I promise I will start to work in my own chapter for your story eventually, just be a little patient.
7161588 It's okay. It's fine. Just take your time.
This took longer than expespted
Not bad.
Honestly I am impressed that you took up the challenge to do such a crossover.
The biggest critique I have is that the world's are not explained, and she goes through them too quickly.
The reader has very little emotionally invested if the pacing is too quick, and the fact that we do not know the stories you are crossing over with makes it confusing as well.
It is a good attempt, but you need to add a bit more world building for each place she visits so we the readers can get more involved in the story.
You do not have to give us the entire worlds story...just enough so we can understand what is going on without having read it.
If done right then your readers will be curious enough to go and read that story on their own...especially if you make the characters intriguing enough here in the crossover.
Unfortunately Yemei does not even speak in this chapter, and the perfect chance to explain the story falls victim to one of many time skips.
No comments? :(
Well, glad this went well. Wonder how much longer pixels got.
Well, that was a lighter mood story after the last one... Would have though pixel still be mad at discord
:D
We'll, this gets more bizzare. Wonder how much longer pixels got to go
That was Awwwesome
this just reminded me of a skit done by Vanossgaming and his friends when they were in the same elevator. weird huh?
7169306 that's part of the joy of doors they barely if ever world build and the stickfigure in the original and twilight in the sfm go through so fast that it's necessary to describe aside from the bare bones
This deserves a down vote for the short summary alone
7282660 My apologies for that, but I was in a rather big rush publishing this. I'll work on the description later to give a much bigger description on the story.
Whoah... why is this Mature?
7195454 Actually, most of that is based off of the video.
"Most of it pornographic".
*Reads description* Okay I'm sold, How do I do this?
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PM me and then I shall explain everything.
:looks at word count:
Not bad. Sad that you and Leo are separate, you two could've made a great team to conquer the game that Discord made. Wonder what world you would do next. Hope you'd do Daughter of Discord.
80000 words!!! Most novels aren't even that long
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80k is like two or three of FoE PH's longer chapters shoved together.