The Adventure of Flynn Rider
This story is on hiatus.
This is a story about the legendary Flynn Rider... Okay, I'll be honest, I was just paid to say that! He isn't even that legendary, and this is just one of his minor adventures, okay? No, really! There's nothing too big of a deal here. Oh, but Flynn Rider will be narrating this story, so I guess that's worth something... Wait, why are you looking at me like that? You're expecting me to give you some information in this description? Forget it! I'm still getting paid for this, so why don't you find out for yourself? Just click one of those chapters below. C'mon, do it! You know you want to...
FBI NOTIFICATION
Flynn Rider is a trademark character of the Disney film, "Tangled." This adaption of one of his adventures is strictly for entertainment purposes only, and should not be taken as an illegally stolen property of a fictional character. Thank you.
Adding chapters weekly, (If possible) and no, that is not a real FBI notification.
I simply thought it made my description look cooler. :)
And now, for some good news! I'm completely refurbishing this entire story! Better grammar, and better story telling! This is now my main focus! Cheers!
This is a really funny story! I liked the humor in Tangled, and Flynn is my fav char there. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Flynn Rider?
First thought: now this is interesting
Second thought: How the hay you're going to create a story good enough to read including Flynn Rider..?
Welp, you already showed how, you've got potential in here
I like how you're making the story from the view of Flynn, him being the "narrator", it gives a different edge to writing and reading stories. And the way you've managed to keep humor near to the "original" one from the film is something that is helping you especially in this story, as Flynn Rider isn't someone I thought I could find in here. Also Flynn stays very well in his character (especially liked the part he corrects himself thinking about these "evil ladies"), although I think he's being a bit push over (my opinion, don't take too seriously)
The way Flynn tells his story is a bit disorienting though, especially when he jumps back to his "main story". It's still good to explain things thoroughly, but maybe he should use some other ways than "anyway" as well to get back to telling the story, as I see him using that a lot. It isn't something that you MUST fix or change, 'cause it's one of the things that gives the story character
I know that I'm sometimes a bit pessimist towards these kinds of stories, but this is something I will be waiting. Keep up the good work!
2879519 Thank you for the feedback! I will do as you have requested, as it is, I, too, have been looking for a way to use another word rather than, 'anyway.' Suggestions? I'd appreciate it! I hope you can see that I've tried my best in the next few chapters!
This story is awesome! Continue! :D
Need more
Love it you really nailed it
so far this story is fun to read and having Flynn Rider from Tangled as narrattor and reading it in his voice makes it awesome
anyway im gonna track this fic and add it to favorite list
anyway keep up the good work and gives us MORE!
2880380 Your story is good! Have you thought of getting an editor, though? A few typos make the story a little messy.
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Indeed so. Could you recommend any editors, though? I do not actually know any...
Ooooh, I bet Flynn gets into more trouble!
3461161 Tell me about it. Wait until you see just HOW MUCH trouble he's going to get into...
3461884 Does it involve Celestia?
3461887 Yes, and much more. I'll be re-writing the story this Sunday, hopefully making it more readable and bringing about a few changes.I just hope you like them!
um can we get more chapters soon please
4870680 In all honesty, this is a rather old story. I've worked on about a dozen and a half other stories since this one. I don't know how to say this... but unless this story gets more attention I won't be able to spend anymore time on it. That being said... I might be able to fit one or two more chapters in the meantime. Have a pleasant day!
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thx same to you too.
also well the only way i know that will et this story more attention is to produce more chapters and advertise your story.
and possibly put the story in more groups it can fit in since it will alert more readers who is in the groups when the story is updated etc which will get their attention.
tho please dont let this sotry die since its good and its sad when good stories dies
4874741 Good news. I've decided to drop all other projects and revive this story. How am I going to do that? By completely re-writing it. The same material will still be there, but I'll ultimately be making the story more readable.
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well i wish you good luck and i look forward to see what you write.
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