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Heart of my own heart, how can I let you go? Love of my life, why go where I cannot follow? Why must you leave me behind, to live on without you? My love, my love, what am I going to do without you?

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Things should be fine, shouldn't they? Twilight made right her broken relationships with her old friends, made peace with Moondancer and saw to her wellbeing in the future. Her trip to Canterlot had been difficult, but things had gone rather well, all things considered.
So why is Twilight still so upset? Maybe a walk will help clear things up.

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:duck: Twilight dear tell Spikey I'll need his assistance tomorrow morning.. . .

:twilightoops: Why not me?

:raritywink: Spike has clawed 'fingers' hoofs are of little good you see.....

6174489 I'm surprised I actually haven't written a story off their relationship yet. There's a good complexity there.

Comment posted by Burning Sunset deleted Jul 6th, 2015

I loved it, and like the episode, this was very well thought out and written. I feel really bad for Moondancer, I don't know if she has depression, but somebody very close to me does. And even if they say things don't bother them, you can see it in their eyes when when something happens. A hurtful comment or an action such as what Twilight did to Moondancer can get to them very much.

Speaking of the look in somebody's eyes, was I the only one who thought the looks on the other threes' faces looked weird. Almost like they didn't want to be there, or like it was a hassle to be around Twilight at all in that episode?

Sorry for going off topic, you have an AWESOME story! :heart:

6174858 Quite a train of thought you've got going there. Thanks!

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