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RaritySimper44


I'm a gravy seal now bitches

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Mac is forced to live with his goofy uncles, one is a grouch the other is overprotective, both want to force him to be a part of their plumbing company. They somehow grow on him though. In this new town, he makes friends, enemies and even has a love triangle involving him. However, the plot thickens when Mac through fate meets former WVBA champ, Doc Luis. Turns out he's a friend of the family, Mac is determined to convince Doc he can go far in the WVBA. Mac is going to do whatever's necessary to make his dream reality. Even if it means going underground to prove himself to Doc.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 15 )

WOW, It´s been years when I was reading this fiction, it was one of my first ones. Did you make a reboot of it:?

Nice reboot. It flows better.

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Yes, this is a reboot. And I'm flattered that this was one of your first.

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I can't wait for the 4 next chapters, to read it in a row. I'm glad you are back, and no problem XD

Huh. Not bad. This is good. Mac is at least seen not as a brute to the Mane 7. The teachers don't care for him. Luna hates him and Celestia is indifferent. All in all. A good start for Mac. :pinkiehappy: :raritystarry: :twilightsmile:

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Not sure. Did you find it in the chapter?

Not bad. I like it.

"Yo dude what-

"I GOT MAULED BY A BEAR! FUCK! STOP ASKING ME!"

"I was gonna ask what time it is"

"Oh...8:42 am"

I said I would finally read it after 5 chapters, and why I imagine Isabelle would be a chiatzu? Game references?

*Eyebrow raised.*

Anyway, good job dude, it looks better than the first version XD

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Glad to hear that I've Improved over the years.

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