After a stressed out Twilight chews out Spike, Scootaloo goes to talk to the depressed dragon, but soon after both start to revile their dark secrets and find comfort in each other.
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Good for a first...Saw a few missing words and a slow reread you'll find them
Spikealoo
Yeah I gotta say twilight feels ooc, so does the one mention of RD. An intresting idea but the execution is sloppy.
Hmm, decent story. I wrote a thingy about these two conversing awhile back, so it's nice to see someone else take a stab at the unique bond these two could possibly share.
I'm surprised a Scootaspike/Spikaloo group doesn't exist yet.
6132798 Here's one: Spikealoo
Grammar point: When you finish a sentence with a character name because a character is talking to that character, a comma is required.
For instance, 'You are the Princess of Friendship, Twilight Sparkle.' Somepony said.
Compared to, 'The Princess of Friendship is Twilight Sparkle.' Somepony said.
It took me a long time to figure this one out.
On another note, Twilight Sparkle came across as meaner than usual in this story, but I liked the idea.
The story had a strong plot with solid dialog.
This premise....actually sounds really interesting!
I'll get around to reading this soon.
6133157 yeah sorry about that. That was Alyssaambrose parts when that happened. She not used to doing it like that, but I'll fix it later to how it is. I was her first story and she wasn't sure how all of it worked or how people like it.
A few ooc moments and a little rushed at points but still pretty good
Oh my gosh fluffy crushes and love
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I must say that was a great story. Though the Twilight thing was a bit unexpected.
Flash Fire Dragon(one of my OCs): Now calm down sweetie. I'm sure there was no real meaning behind the out burst and rather unkind way this version of you treated Spike.
Ryujin (Another OC): Speak for yourself man why did they have to make my Dashy a heartless harpy towards our dear Scoots.
Flash Fire: Every one please if I have to remind you this is an alternate world from our own and so there are several differences. So please calm down.
This story, I liked it! Another!