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Nasha Rei Kun


Writing, Read, listening to music and video games are my passions. I do enjoy a good story from time to time, and I'm a Spike fan.

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With friends coming back to town and leaving just as quickly, Scootaloo finds herself in need of companionship. Enter Spike who's willing to put up her antics.

Spike has dealt with separation, but Scootaloo still needed help in that regard.

Spike x Scootaloo

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 12 )

Ok this was adorable. Glad I read it.

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Thanks for reading. :twilightsmile:

Though the actual ScootaSpike parts were sadly short...

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Yeah, I'm way more use, apparently I'm learning this now, to writing romance over a period of chapters. This is my first One-shot with Romance. Where as I've done a 11 chapter story where the romance was prevalent all throughout the chapters. Are you sure, though? I mean, I thought I added enough, but what would be considered "enough" when it comes to romance?

Amazing story. Though a few errors like hands instead of hooves and what not. I'll start my half of our co-op story tomorrow, my friend. Great job. I expect more Spikealoo soon. And personally I like calling the land Zecora is from Zebrica. But to each their own.

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I was personally just trying to remember what they called it. Did they ever state the name of the land in the show?

I was just in it for the puns.

6900674 Nope fan made name. But everyone writes it different so it's no problem and I understand :rainbowlaugh:

I suddenly want to read more of Scootaloo being a mechanic with some Spikealoo, they way you wrote it was just so bucking awesome.

Really loved the storytelling of what the future of the CMC could be. Scoots as a mechanic and developer of transportation makes so much sense. It is also great for Sweetie to be pursuing her passion as a singer while Apple Bloom keeps at her potions with Zecora.

The dynamic between Spike and Scoots worked perfectly, too. Things do change but changes are always easier when you can work through them with a friend. Or perhaps even learn how a friendship may be a bit stronger than first perceived. :)

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Glad to see another satisfied customer! :twilightsmile:

Nice to see people take a good in-depth look at my work and get my message.

As for the CMC's futures, well, I like the idea of them. Sweetie is obvious, Apple Bloom is curious so hers works. And Scootaloo's work as both a motivation and as a job, so it covers all bases.

"You're even doing the snake thing. Spike, seriously what the hay just happened back there?" She stomped her feet int he middle of the road, as tey stood in front of her house. He scratched the back of his head, before coming clean.

Typo times two! They not tey and in the not int he

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