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Rainbow Dash has always felt empty, as if she was incomplete. It might've been not being a Wonderbolt, but... it was far deeper than that. Like there was an absence of something within her. But when a certain Wonderbolt rescues her in a blizzard and spends some time with her... how will she feel? And how will she react? Maybe being a Wonderbolt... was not the most important thing in her life. Warning on straight Dash shipping, constructive criticism is encouraged, flames shall be extinguished.

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Seen this on DeviantART, but I just had to read it again because I love it so much!

ok i just read the intro and i will write this before i continue reading........while well written its total nonsense......RD is one of the greatest flyers ever and and expert on weather. theres no way shed end up in a situation like that and if against all odds she did she would do what any pegasi or plane would do......fly above the damn clouds.......

now on to reading the rest because 1 your writing seam pretty good an 2 soarin dash is best couple

628429 :derpyderp1: ...I... um... ok, let me try to explain myself here. If you know RD's character you'd know that she's impulsive and just loves to charge into things without thinking, right? Same here. I'm counting on the fact that she misjudged the intensity of the blizzard and stuff, and that in truth the blizzard was so strong her wings no longer could function and she was just, like I said, engulfed, by the blizzard. Of course she's a great flyer and weather pony and all, but my explanation would just be that she got too adventurous. Sorry if my explanation for this sort of thing is bad, but I hope you can understand. :twilightsheepish:

Very nice story. Quite excellent in fact. :heart:

Beautiful story. Have you tried for EqD?

630217 which i kinda guessed but still...... if anything if you just changed it up a bit like say just the scenario it'd be great

My favorite SoarinDash fic from DeviantArt. And here it is!

Great stuff.

Pure Awesome and...to awesome for words.

reminds me of my near death experience, that i had last winter. just without the whole love thing.


Holo, you need to start submitting to EqD.

Your stories are bloody fantastic. :heart:

Continue it! we need a sequel!

Great fimfiction! Soarin and Rainbow Dash are best couple! I love the style of your writing! :pinkiehappy:

Good story, i guess.:applejackunsure:
But you use the word "reciprocated'' way to much. can you find some synonyms? Please?:fluttershysad:

Hey guys, I just needed to clear up a couple of things. 715126 I'm not making a sequel. I'm sorry but I have no good running plot to continue with this, but frankly it's up to your imagination :scootangel: Haha.

630760 710292 Well thanks for that, and I'm glad you guys think it's EqD-worthy fiction. Problem is as you can see, not many people like this story as much as others dislike it, so I have a feeling I won't get a high rating (worse, not even an acceptance!) there even if I tried. :raritycry: Sigh...

637473 I'll keep that in mind, thank you. :pinkiehappy: For this you just have to understand I desperately needed a situation to set it up. But I guess I should be less harsh when that comes, thanks.

792467 "I guess"? :pinkiegasp: :fluttershyouch: Um, well, I... well, yeah, I think I overused a few words. I'll try to look over that then, thanks for that... but by the sounds of it I must've done something else wrong. Sigh... :fluttershysad:

In any case, thanks for the lovely compliments, everypony! And in any case, please, if you have any issues that makes you dislike the story as a whole in general, then please, tell me what I've done wrong. Thanks guys! :twilightsmile:


Finnaly dash is straight

Edit: D'aaaaaaawwwwwwwwwww

So cute:twilightsmile:

Truly a masterpiece when it comes to a romance fics. Very nice job!


I found the story interesting, but the biggest issue is that the whole thing is really just SoarinDash fanservice. If you at least kinda like the couple, as I do, the story is good. But because there's really nothing else to the story, it doesn't offer anything at all to anyone who's not a fan of that pairing.

Love it. :rainbowwild::rainbowwild::rainbowwild::rainbowwild:out of:rainbowwild::rainbowwild::rainbowwild::rainbowwild:

I love this fanfic! :D I read it all the time! :derpytongue2:
Its so descriptive! My heart aches after reading it! :twilightsmile: Great job!
:pinkiecrazy: THE FEEEEELZ~!

That is just so cool,:heart::heart::twilightsmile::raritystarry:
I wish more stories were like this one!! :heart::heart::moustache::trollestia::twilightsmile::raritystarry::heart::moustache:

>.< Make moar now! or else... :pinkiecrazy:

Edit: 3636862267379490975322 / 10 Awesome job :twilightsmile:

Cool story bro

Last comment, except if you reply :moustache:

I need more of this. its too good to give up!! :pinkiesad2: Mooore or I will personally come to your house to deliver you a letter saying a train is about to dropped on you... :pinkiecrazy:

Jokes aside.. (or no jokes in this case.. :pinkiecrazy:) This is mind blowing work my friend :moustache:

Loved the story so muccchhhhhh!!!!:pinkiehappy::rainbowkiss:

Good story 10 dashies :rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

That. Was. AWESOME!!! :raritystarry: :pinkiehappy: :ajsmug: :yay: :twilightsmile: :rainbowkiss:

:rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss: I've never saw a Soarindash fic better than this. Don't you wanna make a sequel?

I originally saw this on Diviant art it melted my heart.now when I saw this on fimfiction I immediately looked for the like button.

Four people missed the like button :pinkiegasp: Love your story :rainbowkiss:

Love.... So much. There aren't enough likes in the world for this fic. 1000000/1000000:pinkiehappy:


You took the old: boy saves girl and girl falls in love with boy, and made a beautiful story out of it. You just explained love in the truest way possible. The emotion you conveyed in the story was breath taking.

I did however noticed a few things that could really throw people off.

First is that you made a bad word choice, ie:

like my life defended on it

It's supposed to be 'depended'

Second is the use of unfamiliar terms like olfactory.
Not every body will know what that means. I think it would have been better if you used smell, scent, or aroma. Just a suggestion.

There was another one but I couldn't fined it in the story again.

Other than those few mistakes this was a beautiful. I hope you make a sequel.

still one of my favorite stories.

This was damn beautiful...
I loved it!

Beautiful. Beautiful. Beautiful. I don't have words. You described love in the truest way possible, the way the words went were smooth and romantic.
I honestly can't believe I've never read this story before.
Love love love it.:heart:

One of my favorites histories *-* just beautiful!!!! You have a very good talent to do histories like this!!! (sorry for my bad English, i'm french)

Also love that near kiss with the tray.

It was very sweet. I loved how Soarin saved her from the storm. Sounds like a very Soarin thing to do knowing that Dash had saved his flank multiple times.

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