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Killbles


Damn, I wish I could read.

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After inadvertently running into Soarin one night when out flying, Rainbow Dash invites him as her 'Plus one' to Twilight's Hearth Warming party.

It's definitely not a date though.

Until suddenly it is.

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That was nice. . . Also, First. . .

Aww that was so cute……I want it in the show :B

Officially my new favourite story on this site :rainbowkiss:

I really liked this goofy and flighty Soarin! Especially the titles he came up with for himself... :rainbowlaugh:

*mashes like button*

Oh I love it when I find an awesome SoarinDash Fic :pinkiehappy:

lookin for a date, BRONY MATE IS WHERE ITS AT, or atleast thats te ad under the story which i found hysterical, good story BTW.

Damn, one heck of a story here. A long fun story. I liked the back and forth between Dash and Soarin. Soarin's story about the accident seemed a bit out of place, and maybe a tad irrelevant due to how brief it was in the story.

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Oh yeah, sure.

But when I started writing this... what, 4-5 months ago now, I had originally planned on writing a few more chapters which would make it tie in and a bit more relevant. I'm still entertaining the idea of writing more but with my streak and incredible attention deficit, it's a pretty forgone conclusion, really.

A new Soarindash story from Killbles? And it's only two years late?

Seriously though, this was great. A couple of grammar issues here and there but nothing too major, and the characterisations were bang on with excellent dialogue between the pair. It's a shame this will most likely stay as a oneshot, though, since this thing is practically begging for all those threads to be explored further down the line.

The race track was a bit whack, though. If the smallest one is several kilometres long and 500m high at its tallest (far, far larger than the colosseum for sure) then just how large is the biggest one?

“I just did that so everypony else would be quiet, it’s not like I like you or anything.”

:rainbowdetermined2: I-i'm not tsundere!

This seriously needs more attention! :rainbowhuh:
There were a couple hiccups in the grammar (small typos, like 'the' and 'they', stuff like that) but overall it was a masterpiece. Not because of a thrilling story or hair raising thrills, but because you captured my exact interpretation of this couple. Because of this, I'm gonna start reading more SoarinDash.

Rainbow sighed internally. Most of the times she’d talked with Soarin he’d been a little… weird. He reminded her of a incredibly mild version of Pinkie although laced with tantalisingly rare moments of wisdom and intelligence. He wasn’t dumb, but he certainly seemed to enjoy putting a goofball act most of the time.

I don't know how, but you just en-captured Soarin's character perfectly. Soarin's behaviour throughout the story was absolutely ON POINT! I just can't express how much I love this. :rainbowkiss:

People say that the SoarinDash romance is often 'too easy', but I find it very heartwarming and pleasant. Too cute. Take all the D'aaawwwws.

Rainbow Dash was very likable, I've always thought that her relationship with Soarin would bring out a more 'girly' side. Frankly, it adds depth to her character; rather than stallions liking her for her tomboyish attitude, they may like her for being true to herself. She's as much a girl as any mare. :rainbowwild:

Also, love the peanuts, great way to slither in some comedy...or should I say, Slytherin...hehe...punny.

Last note: Rainbow Dash wore her hair in a ponytail. 10/10. Always thought she'd look really cute with a ponytail.

Have a like, a fave and a well-earned mustache for your troubles.

:moustache:

Top-notch. Good show old boy!

Nice story, that was a lot of fun. I do like me some SoarinDash, and this fit the bill nicely.

Did I totally miss who Twilight's plus one was, or did she manage to get out of the requirement by being the host?

Needs some editing TLC but other than that it has potential.

Perhaps this means that Friends Have Issues will be picked up again?
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This is really sweet for them just the same though, if in need of editing here and there. :rainbowdetermined2::yay::eeyup::derpytongue2:

9/10; not enough giant robots.

I'm kidding about the robots... mostly...

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I can understand those writing blockades, I just noticed that and was curious. Hopefully I didn't make you mad, I really like the story.

:rainbowkiss: That was cute! Really like the easy-going Soarin!

I really liked this, good job!

Also I liked the word "Pissedly"

Let me tell you something, this is really really good! I Loooove how Soarin and Rainbow play off eachother, it's just....NAAAARGHH!! :heart::pinkiehappy: Favorite SoarinDash fic right here. :rainbowkiss:

yes need moar.........and maybe something along the lines of involving (as Pinkie would say) the ''three F's''

Sequel is needed!!!!!:yay::scootangel:

Great story. A sequel is needed especially after today's episode.

I must say that so far it's my favorite SoarinDash story.
I was reading it yesterday and I had a silly grin plastered on my face from the first word to the last.
I'm not really good at commenting but your story really had me hooked. Hard.
The way you depict Soarin is just full of win. He's a bit goofy (not sure if it's the right word) but not to the point of beeing stupid. I loved his playful and teasing nature. The fact that he's also up for a friendly competition and challenge with RD. Argh.
There is so much things I want to say and I don't know how to formulate it so I will say that it was an incredible story and moment.
I hope you will write more in the future if you ever want and have time. You make me renew with my love for this ship with this story and make me want to draw more of them <3 Thank you.

You're continuing? Awesome!! :rainbowkiss:

LoveloveloveloveLOVE, Please continue, ahhh! :rainbowkiss::heart::pinkiehappy:

So many good fic suddenly brought back to life!
Happy days!!

I pulled this up to re-read one of my favorite Soarindash fluff fics and find it's being continued? Yes!

:pinkiegasp: :pinkiegasp: :pinkiegasp: :pinkiegasp: :pinkiegasp: :pinkiegasp: :pinkiegasp: WHAT?!!!
YES!YES!YES!YES!YES!YES!YES!YES!YES!YES!YES!YES!

Well this is unexpected. . . Better get reading

I should be sleeping but instead I'm reading this awesome update from what I thought was a one-shot. Nice to see you're slipping in aggression into other stories too.

Holt shite; a touching, well-grounded, realistic romantic relationship? In a fanfic?
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Let me say first and foremost that Blaze is a mare, so you might want to change that 'he' to 'she'. :rainbowlaugh:

With that out of the way, this is the direction with their relationship being a blessing and a curse that I like seeing touched on most of all, nice work. :rainbowdetermined2:

Really glad to see you're continuing this story. ^^

I'm not sure if you've picked up on this or if someone's already told you, but the title "Serious Converstaion" is misspelt. :p

“Wow, a real crystal castle.” Soarin asked.
Me no it's not it's merchandise

Truth be told, I'm not usually a fan of Soarin Dash, but you write them extremely well. I love the characterization, and the realistic progression you depicted in their budding relationship. Fantastic work, not only in this fic, but all your stories of this pairing!! Hopefully there's still more story here to tell.

This exactly why I don't go reading stories that haven't been updated in a long time... I really want to read more of this, it was incredibly well-written :applecry:

We need more!!!!! (really :( )

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