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Not really a fan anymore. But, I'll check in occasionally.

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Equestria never thought they'd see the day. Pinkie Pie, the happiest pony in the world, refuses to smile. Many questions arise. What has caused this state of depression? Will a smile ever cross the pink pony's face? Who can help?
This takes place after the events of I Found Love: Discord and Twilight.

Chapters (5)
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Comments ( 33 )

This is cute, Ares. Can't wait to read more :ajsmug:

I am liking this plot. :)

Very interesting. Looking forward to what comes next. (Oh and I love the Twicord relationship going on!)

uh discord isnt staying with twi at hers?

6081332 Uh...no. He has his own home. Their relationship isn't that far gone.:twilightblush:

6081436 oki ^^ sooo does that mean a Discolight sequel ? :DD

6081745 Uh, I wasn't planning on one. Maybe some short stories, but not a sequel. I'm more focused on this at the moment.

Loving this fic! I can't help but wonder if the reason Pinkie is sad, is because she wasn't invited to that convention. How DARE they not invite Pinkie Pie! I'm looking forward to the next chapter and the rest of this story!

is it me or are you better at writing Twicord here than you were in the last story???

6100305 You really think so? Well, thanks. In this story, their relationship is further developed than in the other one. But, then again, I've writing these romance fics for so long, I guess I've just gotten better. But, I digress.
Thanks.

6105062 That wasn't supposed to happen:twilightsheepish:. This is a Cheeepie story not TwiCheese. Is that even a ship??:applejackconfused:

"Pinkie Pie? Not smiling? I'm leaving. The world's ending," Discord turned around to leave, but Twilight stepped on his tail. "Ow!"


LOVED... LOVED! LOVED this part

ALL THE CHAPTER I HAVE BEEN LIKE
okay... okay! OKAY OYAY!!!

*STOPS BREATHING TO FEEL THE TENTION*

Breathplease, humans need to breath

loving this!
and i love the details like cheese thinking things like "cute hair" or "pretty pink face" 'cause that is like kindda a start to the love :pinkiehappy:

and discord there makes everything funny

chaos GREAT CHAOS!

OH PLEASE! WRITE MORE, I HAVEN'T QUIT BIG LETTERS JUST TO COMMENT THINGS LIKE "IT MELTED MY HEART" OR "I SHIIIIIIP IT LIKE FED EX" and that stuff but.... I allready fisnished reading what you writed :fluttercry: :pinkiesad2: :pinkiecrazy: :ajsleepy:

6112172 Don't worry. There's more to come.

Aww! I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope Pinkie gets better soon. :pinkiesad2:

When's the next chapter coming out? I want more!! :raritydespair:

At first I thought she murdered pinkie

"It's true some days are dark and lonely and maybe you feel sad but cheese will be there to show you that it isn't that bad."

When the nest chapter going be done i want to knew what going to happened next and she going started acting like her oldseft or she going be depressed for the rested of her life

7074879 I don't know exactly. I've kind of hit a dead end. I have an ending, but I don't really have a middle yet. I'll finish it, don't worry. But, when? I don't know.

Am I the only one who opened this story JUST because of "Takes place in IFL", hoping for a cute Twicord scenes between Pinkie and Cheese?

Yeah, I guess I am, but it makes me glad - scene with puppy eyes was ADORABLE TO THE NO END!!! :heart: :heart: :heart:

The world is ending XD loved that part !!!

More please !!! I really love this story !!

Rainbow Dash perked up, "Maybe we can't plan a party. But, I know somepony who can."

I'm gussing Cheese Sandwich

Cheese walked around the bed and placed his hooves on her shoulders, gently pulling her off of her bed. "You have been in this bed far too long, young filly. It's high time you got up and walked."

Cheese is giving her some tough love. I love it

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