Discord didn't understand it. It seemed as if one day, she's totally annoying, and the next, she's totally adorable.
Could it possibly be love? Oh, such an idea is preposterous! The Spirit of Chaos in love? Ridiculous.
But, in time, he may find that love isn't such a bad thing.
Yaya another discord and twilight pairing I am just happy to see what you write more keep the good work update soon
I like what you're doing with this story so far. Can't wait for the next chapter.
This story has some really good potential. Looking forward to the next chapter! :)
Hey! This is pretty great, and my favorite ship of all time. Might I make one suggestion? Switch to paragraph form. The individual sentences ruin the flow of the story for me...
Other than that, good work!
7226501 I used to do it that way, but I found that I made my paragraphs needlessly wordy. So, I switched to the spaced out version. I apologize, but I'm going to keep it the way it is. Hope it doesn't ruin the story too much for you.
7229112 Well, this is a major rewrite of the original. If I was only changing a few things, I would change it in the original. But, I'm literally revamping the entire thing. I have a soft spot for the old version, but I felt like it required a rewrite.
7232493 I think it's a very good idea. Since I've been talking with author *bows* a little, I know a few good changes will happen ^^
And, to MLP Fangirl;I love where it's going! Keep it on, you're doing great! I hope these changes will appear.
Did you read my message?
I keep on refreshing this website. I cannot fight this, somebody heeelp!
7243788 What do you mean?
7245443 I can't stop refreshing this website. I want another chapter to come!
7248873
Oh, well don't worry. I'm almost finished the next chapter. Probably some time next week you'll see it.
Ow my this getting very interesting to read keep up a good work update more soon.
omg that chapter was awesome :D
even thou i would like some more intense emotional moments ;3 well see if they come up some time ^^
7252829 Oh, it's coming. Heartfelt moments are right around the corner.
Careful, Discord. That uncomfortable warm sensation is probably Twilight's horrible case of ponyitis spreading to you.

7253131 uuh ^^
only happy emotional or sad painful emotional as well? ;3 because i love both in a story xD
7254132 Mostly on the happy side.
7254176 hm alright
i think sad moments can only make the happy moments more intense and more important ^^
Yay another chapter can't wait to read more.
OH. MY. GOSH.
It's sooo awesome, I love it! I can't... just to brilliant! Gimme moar
one of the best if your works already!
7258372 Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it. I hope to have more chapters up soon.
7258467 I hope so, too :D and I have to admit; this story IS an improvement. Keep it on, don't let go.
7259786 Improvement is what I'm aiming for. So, it looks like I'm on the right track.
7260139 yes you are...
I'm really enjoying this so far. Keep it up! ^^
Keep up the great work, it's amazing
7309963 You got it.
When they made a deal, I thought you'd have made same thing as before... about fur
. And I totally agree with animegirl. MOAR ROMANCE ;_;
Great chapter though
7312606 what doesn't change fact it was far too shoooooort

7312606 Hey, don't worry. The romance will come. Discord hasn't realized that he has feelings for Twilight yet. But, when he does, he's gonna be looking at Twi a little differently.
7315573 i'm not worrying, I am being impatient! That's all. Romance you write is sooooo cute.
Can you tell me the schedule for updates?
7333021 I can't exactly say. Updates for me are usually random. I can't guarantee anything, but I'm hoping to get the next chapter out maybe the first or second week of July. Maybe sooner. It depends, really.
Great story so far!
I wish I could upvote this for every chaper. ^_^ great work!
Actually it would had been funny if Discord play around with Twilights idea. Than she believes it, does her speech which in the end everyone is laughing!
Would be a cool Idea... Lol great chapter!
7412234 Twilight's too smart for that. She'd be able to tell a fake explanation from a real one.
This story is getting very interesting to read keep up a good work update more on this story soon. I wounder when twilight will find out discord loves her.
Really good chapter!! Great story
when are you updating ?
7479398 It should be out before the month is over. Then again I can't make any promises.
Good it's a great story
Yes, that's the ostensible objective of Monopoly: to make your opponents bankrupt.
In practice, though, when one player starts to pull ahead he generally becomes unstoppable and everyone else loses interest or gets frustrated. Honestly, if you value a relationship of any kind with someone (friendship, romantic, familial) do NOT play Monopoly with them.
Oh my, Twilight's twitterpated.
Pleeeeeeease finish it

7707111 I will. I will. I just haven't felt like writing lately. I promise you it will be finished, just not sure when. The next chapter's in progress, at least.
7708680 yaaay
Nice your back!
Worth that wait....The long, loooonnnnggggg wait..
Whew whoo! Finally good to see a update!
7769011 Heh heh
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