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Pizzema Forte

You never know where the green beans are going to land.


Cheese Sandwich had always loved being the traveling party pony he was. He'd been doing it for nearly forty years, but still had the energy and joy in his heart to continue. There was no challenge he couldn't overcome, no party he couldn't throw, and no pony he would disappoint. However, when a new, strange cheesy sense brings him back to Ponyville, he discovers a party he never thought he'd have to plan...

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Comments ( 57 )

I could swear I've seen this... somewhere before. :rainbowderp: Did you post this before, then take it down for editing or something?

So, Pinkie Pie died of either diabeetes or a heart attack. Why am I not surprised. :eeyup:

Aside from that this is a good story. (It's not that Pinkie's death is bad, but the whole 'Pinkie Pie has diabeetes' thing has been overdone ever since 'Bittersweet'.)

Cheese Sandwich is taking everything surprisingly well. Sadness is expected, as is denial, but so far he seems to be quite strong. :pinkiesad2:

I'm willing to overlook that you supposedly made Twilight immortal.

P.S.: It’s really hard to write when you’re disembodied.

How do you like that? Even death can't stop Pinkie Pie from defying the laws of reality. :pinkiesmile:

MY GOD, THE FEELS!!! THEY HURT SO MUCH!!!! :raritycry::raritydespair::raritydespair::raritycry::raritycry::raritydespair::raritydespair::raritycry::raritycry::raritydespair::raritydespair::raritycry:

4026438 Even manly men feel feels.

4026245 I mentioned it in a blog about future short story ideas a little over a week ago, but I was originally going to call it The Final Party

4026427 I didn't make her "immortal". I don't believe alicorns are immortal. I simply believe they age much, much slower than the majority of ponies.

Oh yeah! I voted on this story! :rainbowlaugh: That's why I love the premise so much.

Thanks for that. My memory isn't what it used to be. Us 22-year-old grandpas have trouble remembering what stories we voted on in blog posts. :raritywink:

4027595 It's okay. My memory's awful, too, and I'm only 15. Also, I'm increasingly confused on why this was added to like, a million groups. :rainbowhuh:
Thanks, and I hope I didn't disappoint you or poorly execute the premise you loved so much. :twilightsmile:

I'll probably let you know when I read it tomorrow. :raritywink: I also added it to another group, just for good measure.

I... W-when I read the thingy before story...
I-I thought he was going to plan a b-baby shower...
Not a.... A funeral...! :raritycry:
I'm left in tears, so i guess this is a really good fanfic... :fluttercry:

4026245 Another Pinkie Pie/Cheese Sandwich funeral fic? Or maybe it was Bittersweet? I think it's a sort of irresistible premise. I actually wrote a CheesePie funeral fic two weeks ago, but it's really different, and Pizzy absolutely couldn't have known, and there's always room for more.

Pizzy, I think anything Cheesy automatically goes to a gazillion Cheese Sandwich groups. A lot of us want to read them :)


Gosh darn it. I've only read the first chapter and I'm already crying my face off! :fluttercry: :raritycry:

Well, onto the next chapter!

Oh, no, the exact description he put here was a description I'd read somewhere else, and I couldn't put my finger (or hoof, as it were) on where. He mentioned that he'd said this in a blog post, and I realized that I'd even voted on it in the blog post, which is why I recognized it so strongly. :raritywink:

4029662 Oh, I see! Yes, I see the blog post, now that you mention it. I just thought somehow you might have read mine and forgotten about it, and wondered if it were that forgettable, but I suppose that was too egotistical. I am filled with shame. :fluttershysad:

Okay, I totally lost it at the end. :raritycry: This was so sad, but so beautiful at the same time. Thank you so much for writing and for the feels.

pinnnnnnnnnnnnnkiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee:applecry::fluttercry::pinkiegasp:why u

saaaaaaaaaaaaaaddddddddddd i-iwill be fine:fluttershysad::pinkiesmile:

ok BEST ENDING EVAHHHHH:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::yay:

A little piece of me just died:applecry::fluttercry::raritycry:

I've never cried so much over a story before and when cheese started to sing I balled my eyes out then sang along with him
Pinkie pie I love you but if u ever die again I will join by my own choice

I think I'm going to cry... :fluttercry: You've killed all my feelings with that story. I'm not going to hate it, only because you decided to make my favourite character dead. It was beautiful and well written but still sad and heartbreaking! Good job here anyway. Keep up the good work! :twilightsmile:

Am I allowed to hate you?? :raritycry: :raritydespair:

(I don't really hate you but oh my god :fluttercry: ))

Well done!! I hate/love it !? :heart::heart:

Comment posted by Dawn Flower deleted Mar 10th, 2014

Ain't no funeral like a Pinkie Pie funeral cuz a Pinkie Pie funeral don't stop! :ajsmug:

Aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhwwwwaaaaaaa I can't stop crying!!!!!!!!!!:fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry:

I am sitting here, in silent appreciation. Pinkie died happy and that's all I need to know in order to smile. A great story. You made my heart wrench, and my feelings explode. Thank you for wriring this.

I just... My mind can never deal with party ponies dying... It hurts me... It hurts me BAD...:fluttercry::raritydespair::raritycry:

Oh my sweet Celestia, the feels!:fluttershbad:

Cheese couldn't make me smile if I was there.:fluttershbad::fluttercry:

Sorry about being emtional again... Pinkie can't die... Just... no....:ajsleepy:

Oh, and, WAT WAS WITH THE END?!? HOW DID SHE DO THAT?!?:trixieshiftright::unsuresweetie:

This is so sad!! I didn't actually cry until this chapter when I saw everypony's reactions. The FEELS! :fluttercry::raritycry::raritydespair:

4297970 that's just pinkie being pinkie. :pinkiecrazy:
Also, is your avatar Cheese Sandwich with Rainbow power?

I started to cry during the final not but that phrase "really heart to write while disembodied'' Made me laugh. That is Pinkie Pie.:pinkiesad2:

4297970 It's Pinkie Pie. Nuff said.

this story is really great! i cried throughout, but the worst was when he sung smile. :fluttershysad::fluttercry:


time to read the other one:pinkiesmile:

New element of laughter perhaps? It's only fitting

Try laughing and crying at the same time........HOW DID I DO THAT?????? Only Pinkie.....

I only cried when he sung smile :fluttercry::applecry::fluttershbad::pinkiesad2::raritycry::ajsleepy:

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