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Not really a fan anymore. But, I'll check in occasionally.

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It's Twilight's birthday! Everypony is excited. Except Discord. It's not that he's not excited. He just...forgot. Can he make it up to Twilight before she returns?

Takes place in the I Found Love universe.

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WOOOAAAH!
It was awesome :pinkiegasp::twilightsmile:
I noticed one new message - okay, let's check it. Then I couldn't believe my own eyes, you updated this story! And picture added to it - I can't stop laughing!:rainbowlaugh:
And story itself? Nah, it was good. Chaotic, here's Discord from IFL, but nah, there's nothing too bad about it. Definitiely it's your style of writing - calm, no bloody stuff, no French kisses, lack of descriptions, sweet Dissy, small cute TwiCord scenes. Yeah. Your work in a nutshell.
I thought you will surprise me with a present. Socks for example. Just kiddning, but it would be... amusing at least.:rainbowkiss:
Oh, my. You finally decided! Are you going to use some of my advice? Can I ask about few things? I wanna know, wanna help!

7176153 Glad you liked it. If you want to help, then by all means, do so. I'm open to it.:pinkiesmile:

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!!!!
So awesome!!!!!!:rainbowkiss:

7176162 but what was the presnt discord got for Twilight?

Discord stared at the purple present in his hands.

"Well, Twi, if this doesn't make up for forgetting your birthday, I don't know what will."

7185139 I'm probably going to be doing an epilogue, seeing as how the last chapter is already pretty lengthy.

7185961 if you're gonna do an epilogue, i suggest marking it as incomplete then. Marking it completed makes people think its finished

7185991 Well, it's up now. I work fast. :rainbowdetermined2:

Aren't you going to introduce him as her something-friend to her parents, Celestia, and her... brother first?

7201180 I may consider doing a one-shot about that.

Discord chuckled, "No. Although, I wouldn't mind another mind."

Mind mind? Or I didn't understand something well?

Writing on phone is difficult :twilightangry2:

May 14 also happens to be Buddha's Birthday in some cultural traditions. :twilightoops:

7266873 ...huh. That's interesting. Oh, well. I'm not Buddhist, so May 14 is just another day for me.

Twilight and Discord, sittin in a tree. K-I-S-S-I-N-G.
First comes love, and then comes marriage, and then comes Discord with a baby carriage!:rainbowlaugh:

So... The super party planning couple are fighting over who gets to plan their best friend's wedding. They really need to kiss, realize that they are in love, and then plan it together! 'Cause ya gotta share!

I just it into this Twi-Cord shipping.... and this story just made me love them even more!:twilightsmile:

Spike smirked, "There was a reason I didn't want to go with Twilight. If you want to make it up to her, then follow me."

Surprise birthday part on the day after her birthday? Well this will be interesting.

Rainbow Dash returned his flat chuckled, "Heh, Twi might dump ya."

I doubt it, but she will be sad.

Meanwhile, in the Crystal Empire, the entire royal family was celebrating twenty years of life for Twilight Sparkle.

Twilight is 20? I expected her to be older, like 22.

"Even somepony as powerful as you can become weary. Use it wisely, Twilight."

Will be useful in a big fight against a new evil that threatens the lives of everyone in Equestria.

"That locket first belonged to your great great great grandmare. We have just changed the picture. It is very special. So, you better take care of it, young filly."

Well Twilight is Immortal so she'll be holding onto that for the rest of eternity.

"So, Twilight, are you planning on celebrating with your friends?" Celestia asked.

Celestia is there too? That's surprising. Why couldn't they celebrate in Canterlot then? That way only Cadance and Shining Armor have to move. Twilight's parents are already in Canterlot and Twilight was born in Canterlot so it would be fitting to have her birthday there.

Shining huffed, "If he was a good coltfriend, he would've gone out of his way to wish you a happy birthday."

I'm a little disappointed that some parts have been skipped over. When did Shining Armor know? And if he knows then that means Celestia, Twilight Velvet, and Night Light also knows. It would have been interesting to see there reactions to there relationship, especially Celestia's.

Celestia nodded, "I will admit that I was shocked to hear that you two were actually courting. But, Discord's behavior has definitely improved since his betrayal. He may still be a pain sometimes, but I can tolerate his antics more so than I used to."

Ah, nevermind. I can already get the gist on what Celestia's reaction was.

Luna smiled, "I remember monitoring a dream of his one night. You two were watching the sunset. Quite the romantic scene, I must say."

Ok now I'm really starting to question why they didn't celebrate Twilight's birthday in Canterlot.

He walked over to her, sitting down next to her. "Twilight, as your older brother, you know I'm going to look out for you."

You won't be the older brother much longer. Just give it about 50-80 years.

Shining held up a hoof, "Let me finish. I still plan on keeping an eye on him. If he were to have a relapse, he could go back to his evil ways."

You think Celestia or Luna isn't keeping an eye on him?

Twilight smiled with tears in her eyes, "Oh, Shining." She gave her brother a big hug, "I'll always be your little sister, and you'll always be my big brother. That won't change no matter how old I get."

.... Death? Shining Armor is mortal.

The draconequus shrugged, "Twi says I should stop suddenly appearing everywhere. It's not as entertaining, but I'm willing to listen to her. Mostly."

It'll avoid someone from getting a heart attack, but then again Discord can probably stop someone from dying but I doubt he can revive someone from dying but I wouldn't be too surprised if he could.

Discord nodded, a grateful smile on his face, "Thanks, Spike. You have no need to be afraid, Mrs. Cake. We're just here to check up on Princess Twilight's cake, if you don't mind."

Jeez this is gonna get weird.

Discord shrugged, "Well, I don't know about you, Spike, but I feel like walking today. I hardly ever walk, and I could use some Vitamin D."

I swear, if something happens to that cake... Why isn't he teleporting? He suddenly wants to walk? Maybe the universe is planting thoughts inside his head, maybe the cake getting ruined is a canon event!

The cake slipped out of Discord's hands and into the air.

I fricking knew it.

"Consider it a gift for the princess."

Ah, so that's the canon event. Well atleast it wasn't anything bad.

Rarity scoffed, "Oh, Applejack, you just don't understand. Everything must look perfect. Twilight is a princess after all. She deserves the best."

I would say she deserves the best because of the accomplishments she has made throughout her life saving Equestria over a dozen times, not because of a title and being an Alicorn.

"Well, in most cases I would, but there's something about Pinkie that just gives me the chills. And, I rarely if ever get the chills."

I always had the theory that Pinkie Pie was some kind of relative of Discord, like maybe her multiple great grand daughter.

"Oh, what do baby dragons know? Twilight likes my singing, and frankly, I value her opinion more than I do yours."

Discord valuing someone's opinion? That's a little hard to believe.

With that, Discord and Spike vanished in a flash of white light, startling the animals nearby.

:facehoof:

Doesn't Discord just pop out and into existence? I thought it was only Unicorn and Alicorn magic that makes a bright flash when teleporting.

Discord bent down, whispering in Spike's ear, "Dash isn't taking the credit for herself? Methinks somepony has a crush."

That I can agree on, though I always thought it would be AppleJack.

Rainbow's blush intensified as she chuckled nervously, "Oh, that's just Discord. So random. Heh. Heh."

Huh huh...


Well, Discord planned a party. And, no horrible disasters happened. Yet.
Will the party go according to plan? Read on to find out.

Yet?

She picked it up in her magic, "Allow me, Spike." She smiled as she turned back to the pearly white orb. But, that smile soon became a frown of confusion.

What is it with Rarity and the white orb?

As soon as it was out of his hands, he panicked, "What in Celestia's name was that?!"

I'm gonna guess Pinkie Pie.

Pinkie raised an eyebrow, an innocent expression on her face, "I didn't do anything. I'm going to check on what caused that big boom."

Ok so not Pinkie Pie.

The orange earth pony lowered her eyelids, "Well, ya missed one. Wonderin' how I know? One went off while ah I was carryin' the tray of fritters. Scared the hay outta me, made me lose ma grip. And now, the fritters are on the ground."

Ok so technically Pinkie Pie.

"Oh, no. Please, I'm above that. It was all clean, I assure you."

I'm confused. Context?

Rarity nodded then put a hoof to her chin, "It'll take me about a week to get them back to their former glory, but I can manage."

....

Rarity hugged Spike, "Oh, not to worry, Spikey dear. We still love you. Accidents like this happen."

Ok what happened?

Twilight sat down, bearing a proud look, "Scrying spells aren't that tricky to pull off. And, did you really think a transparency shield would be enough to fool me?"

Transparency doesn't make you invisible, it's more of a camouflage then anything else.

Aside from that, streamers were strewn every which way, and confetti was spread all over the crystal floor.

How did all of this happen?

Fluttershy simply smiled, taking care to cover Spike's eyes.

Smart.

"Now, you can cuddle with me whenever I'm not available. Aren't I the most generous soul?"

Not in a hundred years.


Definitely an Interesting story, it doesn't come to much of a surprise that the party was somewhat ruined, anything rarely goes right around Discord.

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