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ChasingResonance

ChasingResonance #1 · Jun 22nd, 2015 · · · Chapter 1: The Great Escape ·

I like it. This is definitely a pretty cool original story/take on the whole "Displaced" idea. I have to say, though, why are the bad guys always the badass ones? I mean, sure we haven't seen the main character and what he can do, but seriously, chain darts? That's some Scorpion sh*t right there. Also, the description says he has multiple companions, but the story indicates he only has one. Do these new people become his companions or something? I can't see the princess giving a pardon to those two for straight up killing nine guards withing 10 seconds of landing. I still think it'd be pretty great to see the main character and those two become friends, no matter how impossible it may seem. Anyways, awesome story, love the ideas, keep it up, and can't wait for the next chapter!

ChasingResonance

ChasingResonance #2 · Jun 25th, 2015 · · · Chapter 2: Eventful Reunion ·

Dang. This exceeds expectations so far. Can't wait for chapter three.

ponyclaws

ponyclaws #3 · Jun 25th, 2015 · · · Chapter 1: The Great Escape ·

i care not for all these downvotes continue my friend do not allow these nay sayers to discourage you!

ponyclaws

ponyclaws #4 · Jun 25th, 2015 · · · Chapter 2: Eventful Reunion ·

good. very good actually. just need a little bit of proof reading.

ponyclaws

ponyclaws #5 · Jun 25th, 2015 · · · Chapter 2: Eventful Reunion ·

if i were you i would try to get the story put in as an "honorary displaced" it would certainly help your popularity, or at least the number of people viewing this fic.

Cyanjames2819

Cyanjames2819 #6 · Jun 25th, 2015 · · · Chapter 2: Eventful Reunion ·

6132487 Glad to hear you enjoyed it.

Cyanjames2819

Cyanjames2819 #7 · Jun 25th, 2015 · · · Chapter 2: Eventful Reunion ·

6132561 I don't know how I could. Any ideas on what I should do to get more views?

ponyclaws

ponyclaws #8 · Jun 25th, 2015 · · · Chapter 2: Eventful Reunion ·

6132850 well i would ask the creator of the group "displaced" to see if he/she would let you put your story in the honorary displaced folder. then i would either put your story in the "league of humans acting villainous/heroic" group depending on what path(s) you want to make this story take.

Sunbrony01