A man who has traversed many universes - and is willing to write about them.
Twilight Sparkle has always respected her brother's privacy. But when she overhears him talking to someone, she wants to know the truth.
And she discovers that she isn't the only member of her family that has been involved with an alternate reality...
Author's Note: Added second chapter, which, if it wasn't less than a thousand words, could be published as a one-shot sequel to original one-shot.
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I thought there was a thousand words minimum to publish?
5982188 ... 933 words...
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Wat?
Good story, btw.
This is Complete?
Really interesting idea! You get my approval!
Sequel my good sir.
5982188 Do you hate it when somebody doesn't respond to your comment?
Will you be making a sequel?
5982409 I guess?
Sequel por favor!!!!! I want to see what happens next!
Way too generic. Thumbs down.
It feels... rushed? Or unfinished maybe, theres not much to go on but the idea of the mental link with alt-twi is cool.
I'd hate to say this because it's good but it feels kind of rushed.
The comma is on the wrong side of the quotation mark.
This was interesting and cute. Short and fast, but interesting and cute.
~KBO.
5982512 Thank you for your insightful comments. I may get around to writing a sequel in the future, but let me warn you: when I say that there is more than one of everything, there is more than one of EVERYTHING.
FYI, I classify the mane reality as A1B2C3D4E5F6; Twily's home reality is A5B6C1D2E3F4.
Yeah... this isn't finished. You don't have a climax or a resolution. This is more of an Act 1.
5986085 If you'd like, you can tell me where I'm going wrong in mine so I can fix that when I get done with it. Here it is, I hope you like Displaced fics because I have done quite a few with other authors. I also hope you're over 18 since I put lots of mature humor into it.
5986085 Alright, so the answer is contained in the picture below:
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It becomes quite clear once one starts looking at it.
Huh. Short but guuuuuud.
The reference at the end is solid gold.
So let me tell you: It's not only good for a 'first' one-shot. It's also good for a one-shot overall. Kudos.
Have my like, a fav and this handy moustache for the finish.
6052202 Thank you for your praise. I hope that you'll check out some of the other stories I've been writing, such as my EG 3: Twilight's Shadow story.
6051889 I'm gladdened by your praise.
If anything this has made me curious about the universe that Twily is from.
6123861 I may yet have more worlds to unveil...
I like it!
...why the explosion in Twilight's world?
6373990 That was the result of Rain Shy's arrival.
6375247
Oh, right. So Pinkie and Rain Shy have swapped over, then.
...who's Flash?
6379999 Pink Dash and Rain Shy are from a different universe than Twily is.
The main six in Twily's universe are: Twily, Flash, Apple Sparkle, Pinshy, Rajah, and Rain Pie.
The Main six in Pink Dash and Rain Shy's universe are: Lightjack, Butter Pie, Asperity, Pink Dash, Rare Sparkle, and Rain Shy.
And it was Pink Dash who crashed-landed in Twily's universe, NOT Pinkie Pie.
6381064
I must admit this initial story left me feeling a bit lukewarm, but that alternative universe were Nightmare Moon smashing the Elements resulted in them and their Bearers being mixed up sounds really intriguing.
I do hope you explore that further down the line.