A man who has traversed many universes - and is willing to write about them.
Twilight Sparkle wants to take Sunset's offer of friendship.
But she must refuse, because if she doesn't accomplish a certain task before she surrenders her magic, then there will be an unfolding cascade of catastrophes that will tear apart the world that she lives on.
But Twilight doesn't know everything, and Sunset begins a race against time to prevent a past threat from rising again.
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This thing is weird. I feel like you wrote it to only make Sunset a Princess
And what happened to Dazzlings?
That was mean Sunset, singling the Dazzlings like that....
6481475 It was written primarily to explain my opinion on why the magic keeps changing during the Equestria Girls movies, and also as a way to see how an anthro world could come about.
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You shoughn't have rushed the ending , then.
Yeah, that ending was very rushed. This seemed more like a beginning with just a paragraph for the middle and the end. The part that's there was really well written, but it feels incomplete. The way Sunset dealt with the Dazzlings felt wrong too, like something I don't think she would do. I saw your comment about what this was really meant to do, but it feels more like a statement than a story because of that.
This really needs a long and detailed sequel explaining how humanity as a whole adapts to changes, advances in ways unobtainable before, magi-tech, possibly even teleportation based FTL drives... The possibilities for a world like the one you've created are nearly limitless, I'd like to see it expanded on... Also there's the probable massive increase in the female population since magic in MLP seems to be majorly Female oriented, it's actually a possibility magic itself is why Equestria has so many mares and very few stallions, then again, it's just a theory, but it's a good one, magic is stronger in Females, that's why Equestria seems to be mare-dominate... Aaaand I'm boring you with all my babbling aren't I.
I'll just say it in simpler terms, this really needs a sequel to show humanity growing into and adapting to the changes that the infusion of magic into the universe will bring... And also how the new Alicorn.. Human... Alihumans? Hulicorns? Screw it, how the new human alicorns react to their changes... And I'm assuming Sci-Twi's nightmare form became permanent, or she became an alicorn as well, so seeing her reaction to it would be interesting.
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Leaving twelve comments with a total of eighteen YouTube videos just to ask someone to write a crossover that you want to see is kind of a dick move. Either commission someone to write it or write it yourself, but don't clog up the comments of an unrelated story to tell the guy what the cast would look like if someone made a movie and cast exactly the people you wanted in it.
Also written stories don't need trailers, those are for games and movies. And you don't need to send him the links to the emails you sent him, they're in his inbox.
6492261 I don't know oh mustachioed one the ending seemed good to me and you made a positive criticism too
Bra...you know EG4: Legend of the everfree? Well, part of the plot seems to have copied your story and idea of Equestria Girls Three before the movie came out...strange....
Have you read Oversaturation by FanOfMostEverything? Because this reminds me heavily of that.
The ending was definitely rushed. I would be very happy if you expanded or continued this.