Eight months after the events of Equestria Girls 2: Rainbow Rocks, a new threat arises that not only threatens Equestria, but also every other dimension in existence - and it's Twilight Sparkle! Twilight has faced many threats to the safety of Equestria over the years - but can she face down herself? And what part does Human Twilight play in all this?
Not bad, not bad at all
A few misspelled words here and their but nothing to worry about, good job
5733208 Thank you, Shazam Jr. I've been reading yours as well. It's quite good (although I'm not finished yet).
5733214 Ok
OOOOHH!!!
I like this... Keep up the Awesome work!!!
WAIT JUST A SECOND!!! HOLD THE PHONE!!!
*gasp I think I know who you are speaking of! Sunset Shimmer!!!
5733286 Nope. Sunset Shimmer is included in that already. The one other is someone else.
5733216 Just finished reading your EG3; I went ahead and read your EQ4. It is quite engaging. I can't wait to see the next chapter of it!
5733496
OOOh
I LOVE SURPRISES!!!
And the story begins with a cliffhanger! I like it.
5733512 Thanks :)
Like anything particular about it?
Oh, I look forward to see how Human Twilight will react
5734010 The Concept of Equestrian Sunset Shimmer pushing the human Sunset Shimmer into the portal because "it might have been awkward". Also, the fact that Human S.S. has black hair is intriuging.
5733638 The next chapter should make it pretty clear who it is - if not necessarily why.
Well.... that was unexpected.
Interesting. If this goes where I think it's going Twilight isn't going to be really willing to help the girls
5742614 What was so unexpected about it?
5744122 Just wait until you see the next chapter!
...ooooookkkkkkaaay...
...Din't see that one coming...
5745443 Is that a good surprise or a bad one?
5745684
ARE YOU KIDDING ME?!
AWESOME SURPRISE!!!
Just unexpected. That's all.
5745969 Well then, what do you think of the title for the next chapter: "From Sunset to Sunset"?
5745989
AWESOME!
It kinda gets you thinking..."Oh, what totally AWESOME Stuff is gonna happen here?"
I like that Title.
5746003 Do you like my portrayal of the human Sunset Shimmer?
5746010
Yes, I think that it a very good idea of what happened to her. I can't wait to see what happens between her and Pony Sunset.
5746027 Well, you aren't going to be disappointed, Yappyjack, 'cause here comes:
Sunset vs Sunset Round 1!!
5746048
AW YEAH!!!
5746084 Indeed. Who shall win?
Welp, cliffhanger. Good job so far.
5746255 Thanks for the compliment.
You have absolutely no idea Twilight. Absolutely no idea.
5754478 You've got that right, EpicShadowz!
ooh, that was epic and violent, nice job :)
5754772 YAY VIOLENCE
How did Twilight not faint from the maelstrom of crazy shit?
5756071 Because she's Twilight: always dealing with the most unexpected senarios and bizzare incidents in a calm and methodical manner - at least most of the time.
AWESOME!!! Epic alert!!! I loved this one! Keep up the overly AWESOME and EPIC work!
5758079 Touche
5759948 Indeed.
5758361 Thanks for the compliment, Yappyjack!
Short but awesome
5830975 You're welcome.
I like the two sides of Twilight's personality. Three voices vying for control.
Totally cool story, great job!!!!
So... In the meanwhile, twilight saves equestria. Just an average day, I suppose?
well i was honestly expecting more... oh well shit happens
5849401 Ever hear of the law of maximum doo-doo?
This is interesting. *Strokes chin in Magnificent Bastard style*
so it wakes up after 10 thousand years. infects an alicorn then goes back to sleep? Man talk about lazy.
5861781 It's been in hiding from the alicorns, since they were the ones who wiped them all out. It needs to hide 99.99999% of the time because otherwise it would be tracked down and destroyed.
Continue!
Cliffhangers are mean...