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Petitprincess

I moved here from Fanfiction just to see how well my stories will do here. Of course, I'm not looking for popularity, I would just love some feedback, just to see if I'm going in the right direction.

Petitprincess Joined 6th Mar, 2014 · Offline

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Animated Rarity
Animated Rarity #1 · May 4th, 2015 · · 3 ·
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Any good Sombra story is my type of story m/m or not:pinkiehappy:

mapu
mapu #2 · May 4th, 2015 · · 2 ·
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The story is not better than summary.

Petitprincess
Petitprincess #3 · May 4th, 2015 · · ·
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5938374 Please tell me what's wrong with story, instead of just saying it's not good

mapu
mapu #4 · May 4th, 2015 · · 1 ·
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5938385 Formatting, word and sentence order, characterization.The countdowns, out of order explanations of stuff that does not matter, walls of text, OOC actions of ewryone, hand waving half of the back story, false tagging (there is no romance, sex, or comedy) ...

I am too lazy to point out all the stuff.

It gets better toward the end of chapter, but the beginning is just bad.

Well good luck writing anyhow.

blue-hart
blue-hart #5 · May 4th, 2015 · · 7 ·
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i love you!!!:heart::eeyup:

thunder_storm91
thunder_storm91 #6 · May 18th, 2015 · · ·
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I like it, wish there was more to it

Aerin Silverfeather
Aerin Silverfeather #7 · Aug 17th, 2015 · · 2 ·
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Slowest buildup I've ever seen, EVER

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