I moved here from Fanfiction just to see how well my stories will do here. Of course, I'm not looking for popularity, I would just love some feedback, just to see if I'm going in the right direction.
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Where have you been? I love this paring! It's great and filthy and wrong and oh yeah... Maid outfit? That's a classic but I've never seen the appeal until this fic!
Dammit, how did you know I can't resist this pairing?! Upvoted.
i don't what to think about this....
5600344 Did you dislike it that much?
5600411 I didn't dislike it i just dont know what to say. it was a funny story though
5600411 Can i ask you how long does it take for a story to be approved?
5600440 it takes a few minutes and maybe an hour or two to approve. It all depends. Why?
5600454 I wrote a story and published it but I have waited 3 hours and it hasn't been approved
5600482 It takes a while for a story to be approved. It's best to wait until the next day.
5600497 Yea your right
5600497 Thanks for the help :)
5600499 You're welcome!
such an awkward boner. Go, shoo, get out of here.
unlikeable? heck no , shiningsombra is loved by many , especially when it's this kind of scenario ^^ ......
that cover art image is overused though....
You glorious bastard!
You made me fall in love with the ship!
5601174 Sombrarmor
5602252 clever
also rofl your icon.....
5600504 5599982
This is a original and good concept and ship. I hope we get to see this get a sequel.
I wasn't expecting an update to this, but bra-VO! I can only hope that there's more you can make involving these two, since the embarrassment and domination is really hitting the right buttons for me.
Wow that was silly. Poor shining armor... Hehehe
is it wrong that I need more?
5615396 There's no such thing as being wrong with this shipping!
aww man , is that really a place to leave this at?....
5618770 Don't worry; More of this shipping is coming soon
5618905 yay!
*clicks on chapter Four Star Service.*
Let's start!
Found this in r63 group feed, reads and fins no r63
5799729 oops, mixed up rules! Sorry!
5799775 that's OK! Great story anyway!
Sexy
Oh look, yet ANOTHER Petitprincess story to track... my my my.
The guard captain, proud as he was however, could only listen as his little sister and her friends trotted away, listening to their laughter. Laughing at him. He was almost disappointed in his sister, for laughing at somepony, nevermind her brother, in a time of humiliation and need. So much for her friendship lessons, hell, so much for being a half-decent pony.
The white stallion turned his head to Sombra, whom was still wearing that smug look. And that was the tipping point. Shining Armour took a step towards Sombra, who's expression softened, a more genuine smile spreading across his face. Perhaps he was preparing to say something to soothe his lover, maybe pucker up for a kiss, but he didn't get the chance before Shining's fore-head smacked into his muzzle.
With a cry and a few stumbled steps back, Sombra looked up and Shining, holding his muzzle, which was pumping blood steadily, and found him tearing his collar off and tossing it at him. Looking down at the collar, and then back up at the stallion, Sombra could only watch dejectedly as Shining Armour pushed past him.
"Find somepony else to wear your collars" he spat, without even looking at Sombra. The corner of the black stallion's eyes went down as Shining trotted off, Twilight and her friends having turned around in shock at the sound of Sombra's scream and watching him march towards them, all sound of laughter dying as they saw Sombra, tears in his eyes and blood running down his lips.
As he pushed past Twilight, he batted her around the head, as siblings would when scolding one another, but much harder than Twilight could remember him ever doing before. Shooting hard looks at the ponies he didn't have the moral right to strike at that point, he left the insensitive ponies to it.
Sombra could only watch him go, his tear of pain subsiding, but his tears didn't stop falling.
"Oh no" was all he could say.
I love stories like this