Chrysalis' changelings need to learn every aspect of stealing a pony's love. They enjoy some classes more than others.
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Honestly, I was expecting the entire class to have made that mistake.
Welp, that actually went better than I predicted. Hopefully, Chryssie won't be too harsh.
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Here lies Buzzik
"Doesn't matter; had sex"
2016
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You underestimate how horny Ponyville ponies are in clopfics.
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Oh, she'll be pretty harsh.
Well, at least he had sex with Flivvy before his imminent death. That makes it worth it, right?
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Well, would you accept it in his place?
7310768 That's a tough decision--Flivvy sounds really, really hot.
A moment of silence for the (soon to be) fallen, please.
Okay, I'm gonna be honest here - I usually go on people's clopfics to poke fun at them and tease the authors for my own amusement, but I've gotta admit that this sentence right here actually made me root for Buzzik.
Fucking cheese-grater legged bitch deserved a lot worse than cum on her ugly face for turning her subjects into sluts and street-corner gigolos. Poor Changelings; they always seem to be used as whores in a lot of stories on this site.
Ah well. Queen Chrysalis dies anyway so there's that to look forward to.
Well he's gonna die
Don't tell us that!!! Half the fun is wondering what will happen! Even if we beg! You have to keep us guessing!
Great story tho...
Well, nice little bit.. at least Buzzik got to have some fun and get what he's been trying to get all week before Cheese Legs finds some way to make him regret even being alive. Can't wait to see what that is.
And again, damn is this story good, you do some real grade-A clop... and actually manage to make the story good in it's own right, which always makes the actual sex all the more fun and enjoyable. So love your stuff.
oh crap that's scary even from this end.
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Okay, I like this plan of action. And I like that you like this plan of action.
Love some three person relationships. Two Bi's and a straight, typically, I'm going to have one as well, except it'll be two males and a female.
I don't know why but I saw that mistake coming from the last chapter however I didn't see it being Fliivvy
7310744 definitely worth it
This story--->
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It seems odd to me that you'd be here in a clopfic that heavily features Chrysalis if you hate clopfics and Chrysalis...
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So it goes.
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You're still guessing what his punishment will be, though, aren't you?
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^.^ And to think, I haven't even really been trying to put a story in this one. Huh.
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^.^ Muahahaha!
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I'm also a fan of nontraditional relationships. Monogamy is overrated.
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Well, some people saw it coming, others didn't.
I guess the subtlety of my hints was more-or-less well balanced then.
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If you're looking for a sympathetic audience to complain about clopfics to, the comment section of a clopfic isn't where you're going to find it.
Turn 'view mature' off if you don't like it.
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^.^
What was your favorite thing about it?
7311184 Well, I just started the story and I've only read two chapters so far (Plan to read the others on a later) but at the moment, I kind of like the how you set up the Changelings in this story so far. I always did kinda view the Changelings as a Equestrian kids' version of succubus's/incubus (at least in my head cannon) and I see a lot of correlation and influence in this. And the sex is also a well-written bonus, I must say.
7311184 Well.. as to 'punishment' she did mention the whole "Class gimp" last time....
And all kinds of ways she can make them suffer nice and long.... so yeah to many options to really choose from.
7311206 No, it just means your argument has no validity since your posting anti-clop sentiment in the comments section of a clop fic, if you want to view non perverted content please turn off your view mature filter. you can find plenty of well written stories in the T section of the site.
also Buzzic... I only have four words for you.
*shudders* I can kind of imagine what one of the punishments might be.
I say one because of the ending. You know that you're gonna be very sore in the morning.
And not the good kind either
7310869 no she dosn't die shes just left in a frozen wasteland i guess?
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Nice song! ^.^
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Yeah... next chapter might get a bit nasty.
7310855 Press F to pay respects.
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F
I can't see this being the first time this has happened in the hives history. I mean, there must have been at least a few more times, right?
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And Chryssy got just as enraged each and every time.
Saw that coming. This isn't going to end well for them, is it?
Well that wasn't so bad. Yet.
Keep going! ;)
... Well, I suppose there can always be a silver, love-stained lining in everything. And look at the bright side, at least now the young couple can undergo extreme hardcore sexual punishments together instead of alone.
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I'm not the best motivational speaker am I?
On a side note, wonder what ole' Chrissy has in store for them now, maybe the nigh-impossible task of securing love from a bookish purple Alicorn perhaps?
Also, I reeeeeeeeeeeeally hope there's a sequel to this. It's really just that awesome.
I never understood the logic that people had went posting anti-whatever on what they dislike. It's not like someone will read your opinion and suddenly change.
7311410 Just let me enjoy the thought of her perishing and rotting away to bones and organs, please?
And I was actually referring to a future plot that has yet to be revealed. Chrysalis is going to die.
7311184 I was gonna poke fun at you and the story, maybe rile up some people in the comments because I get sexual pleasure out of pissing people off. But seeing Chrysalis get humiliated the way she did made me change my mind. Stupid cheese-grater legged bitch deserved spunk across her stupid face for what she's turned her Changelings into.
Also, I don't actually hate Chrysalis. I just hate her character here, when she turns her subjects into sluts and whores to ate her own ends and needs. I despise characters who do that sort of thing. There are other stories where I feel sorry for her and even dare I say like her a lot.
Anyway, I won't linger too long. I promised not to cause trouble on your clopfic, so I must search for another.
Think of what you will, but I'm kind of like Galactus from the Marvel comics; if I don't annoy a clopfic writer, I'll die inside.
Would you like to be my herald and become the Silver Surfer?
7312079 buy me a sandwich every now and then, and i would gladly
suck your dickbe your herald.7311708 You'd think she'd have warned her class about this and have come up with a way to prevent it from happening, some code word or something.
Or... she wants it to keep happening so she gets to have the fun of punishing those that screw it up.
7312300 yeah that sounds just like her
7312359 Agreed. She just wants an excuse to not be a benevolent Queen
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Well, yes and no...
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The badness comes in the next chapter. I already have some ideas...
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And risk the imbeciles screwing up and revealing the presence of the whole hive? Hardly!
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Well, there will be an epilogue chapter or three. As for sequels, there's always Sex Ed: Pony Style.
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Exactly.
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Heh, you might like my other story: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/192027/a-mothers-love-never-dies
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Being silver might be fun. ^.^
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I think you guys might just have figured her out.
7312746 I see a "no" there... so...
7312746 In that case, my new Dirty Silver Surfer, you can begin by bringing me the kidneys of the three people who downvoted me. Wouldn't want me to contact somebody from the Deep Web to deal with them now, would we? Hee hee hee.
NEVER go to the Deep Web folks. Bad shit down there.
7313112 Whoa easy there when you mention the D.W. they might not give back your genitals again next time.
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I need some silver powers if I'm going to run around harvesting kidneys.
7313146 Good point. That's a damn good point there mate. Good thing I've NEVER gone near that place. I mean...it's deep...and it's dark...and it's a web. Webs are sticky.
I don't like sticky things.
I'm eating some Starbursts.
7313180 I grant you the power to get a fucking move on. Take the keys to the truck. Supply your own hacksaw.
7313180 D'oh, I can't stay mad at that face your avatar is making. Take your time, sweetheart. You can harvest organs when you're ready, my little button-nosed dumpling thingie.
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He put the (yet) in there.
That means he is going to die.
RIP Buzzik.
Moar.
Well, at least he went out with a bang!
...I'll leave.