Chrysalis' changelings need to learn every aspect of stealing a pony's love. They enjoy some classes more than others.
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Oh, you mean the new chapter I just posted, right now?
Huh. Can't say I expected that.
moar
This definitely beats one clopfic I read before that I believed was the best clopfic I've ever read. This goes in my Best Stories shelf.
Yes. YES!
FINISH HER
*New chapter*
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I no longer want to be a diamond dog can I convert?!
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Lel Flash.
Need more..time machine broken, must resort to drastic measures
wow.... interesting.
Well...This sure beats normal sex-ed...Much less thick-minded laughing from morons...So far I give this fic a tenouttaten out of ten.
And the chapter was good til it had the parts about the queen implanting the eggs inside a drone. Then I just threw up in my mouth.
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Well, yeah. Later chapters are going to end up with some fetishes in them. Nothing too extreme, I hope, but not for everyone, of course.
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Thanks! ^.^
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It's fun when you get to invent a whole new sexual biology. ^.^
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Well, if you're going to skip in time farther (maybe by slipping below a black hole horizon?), be sure to skip a week or two after Everfree NW... I'm not sure I'll be able to get another chapter out before then.
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All of them are just too fast for their own good.
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Of course. Just step into this cocoon. Mind the green slime.
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They're all just too fast for their own good. ^.^
(Where's Rainbow Dash?)
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Glad you're enjoying it. ^.^ What's your favorite part?
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It's good advice!
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Heh, yeah. Changeling biology is unusual... but fun!
(Heh. Unusual butt fun. That'll have to wait for another chapter.)
5992993 Would have been nice to have a warming as to what fetishes are gonna be in this story.
Feeling sorry for Zilly, hope she comes out of this happy. Great chapter though.
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Heh, sorry about that. I've already put a warning in an author's note at the top, and I'll do the same for future chapters, if that makes you feel better about it.
5992993 The suspense will kill me! I shall just have to make do rereading the other chapters while I wait. Good luck, and godspeed.
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Aw, don't worry. She'll be fine.
Excellent chapter once again, Secret! I love the educational aspect mixed in with the clop material
But the oviposition part... it's a reality check after all the previous material; but still kinda hot xD
I love this... and I love you (nohomo?)
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Great chapter. Really neat(?) to see how you've invented an entire sexual process.
I am... unsure. But in a good way... I think. I hope.
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I need a strong alcoholic beverage...
My favorite part is not only the clop, but also how the story is structured. Everything builds up nicely, and gives the reader a sense of foreshadowing of what might happen in future chapters.
I also like the way the changelings are describes as - especially Buzzik. He's an interesting drone that had caught my interest ever since the beginning of the story. I've been seeing how his personality, and his actions correspond to an event in future chapters.
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^.^ It's a lot of fun.
And, honestly, it's nice. It gives me something to do whenever I hit a bit of a block and I'm wondering how I'm going to proceed without making it seem repetitive or awkward... I can just have Chryssy talk to the class about what's happening! ^.^
Changelings are weird... but also still kinda hot.
Yay!
Aw... Not even a little?
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That's the funnest part, for sure! ^.^
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And thus, an oviposition fetish was born.
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Heh. I can't help but use a bit of artful technique. ^.^
Oh, good. I'd been worrying, actually, that I hadn't really developed his character much, but it sounds like I'm doing fine.
5992993 I'm a big fan of oviposition and pregnancy. This chapter was basically top-shelf unf all the way.
5992993 Everything is awesome
5992993 seems like it. I really enjoyed the chapter.
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Good, good. ^.^
That's the thing with fetishes, I guess. Some may complain about it, but for every one there does, there's another who loves every minute of it.
Another great chapter, but I did notice something that bothered me:
After which, she proceeds to completely ignore that time-frame. I suppose it could be explained by having multiple clutches at a time, and the one she deposited into Zilly was not the one seeded by Buzzik; but as it is right now, there's a bit of a continuity issue here.
5991671 To quote Dr. Zoidberg... Yay! People are paying attention to me!
5993463 Or perhaps Chrysalis is playing a cruel joke.
5993036 I like how it rustles my jimmies in all the right places.
Either a cruel joke to one who didn't study, or what you really meant to say was...
This class is amazing!
5993665 Or the eggs were ready beforehand and Buzzik didn't actually fertilize them. Kinda like how cooking show sometimes have parts of the meal already made up because they would take to long to wait through the whole process. be it chilling/baking/frementing/etc.
Yay, my guy is here! can't wait to see more of him in the future.
Whoa, this is really interesting. Please, keep going.
5992993 I wasn't surprised that much by the changeling biology(what you've got is very similar to my headcanon), just the fact that Chrysalis would just impregnate one of the students so casually. Admittedly I don't know exactly how you're going to have the changeling society structured, so who knows how this will affect Zilly in the future.
Just curious, but how did you come up with the idea to use the ovipositor to lay eggs in a member of the same species?
Also, that was dick move of Chrysalis.... in more ways than one.
Holy crap.
Was that casual impregnation? As a lesson on reproduction? By Celestia's voluptuous ass you've hit a very specific fetish of mine.
Gods, just...everything about their interactions revs me up. Poor little Zilly is especially fun! I also adore the way he thinks when he's experiencing new sensation, like when he imagined how deep his cock must be in Chrysalis.
Also that little mind-reading thing in context of it being completely normal to changelings is really interesting.
Poor Zilly though. Wonder how that's going to go. I guess I'll just have to stick around to find out.
Yeah, that's why. That and one other reason.
....Oh wait. Five hours....
She's probably fine....
Not big on oviposition, but at least Chryssi has the proper biological equipment for it, as opposed to some pictures where she's squeezing eggs out of a penis. *cringe*
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Dammit I laughed.
But uhh that means she took Buzzik just for fun :P
And oviposition is best position !
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5993665 I see I wasn't first to get it :P
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"(nohomo?)"
The question mark was placed there more as a negotiation
I'm happy with whatever amount of homo your comfortable with wink wink
Teehee
(How I look when I read this story)
hope these links work lol
5994334 And this is exactly why it disturbs me so much. Can the Queen really just up and decide who becomes a mother just like that? Does Zilly get a say in this? Why is this all done so... casually.
It loses some of the spark of the moment by having it be so... casual.
It feels like a cheap ripoff of old porn with plumbers and shit.
Come on... I mean she doesn't even get to choose her partner or anything! UGH!
5993098 I just wish procreation wasn't so... forced and out of the blue for the changelings.
Impregnation IS a fetish of mine but... the way it is done it loses some of the magic that is involved in it. I don't know... It just seems like "stuff happens" all the time. There's something... something is missing.
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Heh, I suppose that's just how fetishes work. To me, the casualness makes it an entirely different kind of special, because of what it would have to imply. These guys aren't acting like prisoners in a Gulag, they act more like whiny teenagers; they're happy and healthy, despite how much some might complain. That would mean that, if impregnation via the Queen's whim is such a normal occurance, then perhap's it's not such as a disruptive event to them as it is to us. Perhaps Zilly has nothing to worry about, despite Chrysalis' (from our perspective) callous treatment of them, is never going to let them deal with anything on their own. She did say that they're all legally her children, after all.
I'm a sucker for communal societies.
5995168 That's not exactly communal society but... Anyway it just wipes out any indication that love exists here. I suppose in all the clops I've read there's been some sort of love involved, or some sort of consent. Here there isn't either and it wipes out the magic of the moment for me. My urges fail me if the way it works is blatantly... preposterous? I dunno... their society shouldn't be SO alien and so familiar at that. It all begins with suggestions of their society having SOME at least common things with ponies like families and all.
Then this chapter comes and slaps me in the face with so many things that it makes my boner go down.
This story is the one which attracts the most bizarre coments and damn hell that im finding a lot of them
However i belive that chrysalis took revenge on zilly for disobeying her