Chrysalis' changelings need to learn every aspect of stealing a pony's love. They enjoy some classes more than others.
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great chapter
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Thanks! ^.^
OK, that was hot.
Stop it! You're making me moist.
God they are right, that word makes anything creepy.
I really like that story, but this chapter felt so lazy this time.
I mean it had threesomes, but it managed to keep me completely unbothered. It could be the incredible heat of summer, but I guess this chapter was just too quick. We had no time to get to know the new characters and enjoy the situation. everything happend too fast and in less detail than the previous ones.
I hope you take more time for the next one to be better than that, because this barely scratched on "average" in my opinion.
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I'm embarrassed to admit how hot that was. Damn you're good at writing these!
I wonder why he wants Flivvy so bad...
Stupid Stikka, I hate him! Buzzik-Aphin was my choice of shipping. But author is always right.
Anyway, it was nice chapter. Thanks.
Nice chapter~
*Blinks*
I know what bukkake means.
Tis gun' git veird.
I hope Zilly gets the bukkake punishment.
Inb4 Buzzik kills everyone to get Flivvy.
Zast ist wonderbar ja?
Well chrisalys still didnt forgot about zilly
This story takes the phrase 'Fuck it all' to seriously.
Dang! I was hoping for a teensy bit of paunch to start showing on Zilly already (edit: no, wait. Right. These lessons are day-to-day. I'm dumb). Our little Zilly is getting bold, though! Defying her Queen so openly! So rebellious! So confident!
So fucked~!
I had a question about your planned next stories with Buzzik.
Do you plan to stick with the Flivvy romance in the next stories, and/or do the stories happen before or after this story?
Hate to be that guy, but I'm pretty sure its spelled bukakke, with 2 ks after the a. Just something small I somehow noticed, doesnt really detract from the story, which is great. Not even sure why I pointed it out...
Fuck i hope my aphin and buzzik canon wont sink
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Glad you all enjoyed it! ^.^
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It's terrible, terrible...
Because I agree with you.
But I had a proper conclusion to the story all panned out where Buzzik and Flivvy finally get together, but in an unexpected way... Not sure if that's going to work anymore. Hm... maybe with a couple extra chapters, things could be wrapped up properly.
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Oops! Fixed now.
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Okay, so...
First, they're only going to be loosely tied... not strictly sequels of each other, and their respective canons might differ slightly.
And they are, of course, extremely different from each other. This one's a sexy clop, the next one is sad, dark and tragic, and the one after that is an adventure romp.
And, no... I don't plan on continuing the Flivvy romance through the others (the second one is already published, by the way, and reading it will readily explain why the romance won't be continued through it).
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Hm... you're giving me ideas, you are!
It'd be fun for her to become increasingly rebellious until Chryssy drops the hammer and really punishes her. Hm... maybe that's best saved for the fetish chapter.
As for showing... they're changelings. Who's to say she shouldn't be visibly preggers by the end of the week? ^.^
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To be fair, though, every clopfic does that.
Welcome to the wonderful world of porn!
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Of course not! ^.^
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Well that escalated quickly.
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Would you believe, I was unaware of that scene when I wrote this one?
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I wasn't really planning on actually doing it... but maybe I should. ^.^
Of course, she'll have to do something really evil first, to make sure she deserves it.
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Don't worry; I think things will work out.
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Hm... I should go a bit more in-depth on that, shouldn't I?
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Hm... yeah, this chapter was a bit of a step down from the previous, definitely.
Though I will point out, there were no new characters; all of those were recurring from earlier in the story.
But yeah, I'll try to spice things up a bit in the next. ^.^
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Not creepy at all!
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Her mere presence is enough justification for me.
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Wow, you already hate her that much?
Still, I'm sure there are some who would call it overkill unless she does something to deserve it.
6178624 Hey if the universe conspires to keep someone (or pony or changeling or whatever fantasy creature you are) from what they want then all they can do is force their way to it.
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Nah, I just want to see her get hosed down by a bunch of her classmates.
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Then I just forgot about the friend I guess...
Good to know that you realized that this chapter was weak. Good luck with the next one
I'm in love with this story. I'm DEFINITELY accepting this headcanon. By the way, how do you think the Mane 6 and the Princesses of Equestria would react to this story?
6178624 ah okay, thanks.
I'm guessing the story is on your main account right?
6178624 Oh, derp, nevermind. I just skimmed over your previous chapters and saw it was Flivvy Buzzik had an... interest in. Just forgot about her.
6178231 MFW I type the word into google, finding that "bukkake" has 38.400.000 hits as opposed to "bukakke"'s 1.090.000 hits . Even more so upon discovering both variants are wildly used.
Let's face it. Flivvy will automatically be taken.
Rip in piece Buzzik, hope you enjoy Zilly.
Bahahaha! I've been picked by a teacher that way too. Just not for something so... Interesting.
Pleeease make sure buzzik and Flivvy get together.. it would break my heart if they didn't :c
also i have to write my own changeling story now, along with many others.. really need to get into Clop Fic writing.. so many ideas!
you have inspired me good sir or mam! with this story!
When you reading pony porn at 3 am wondering what the hell happened to being normal like
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But flivvy T_T
6183272 I ship ALL OF THEM! Except Zilly.
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I think your enthusiasm is rubbing off on me.
(I hope that's enthusiasm that's rubbing off, not something else!)
Now I'll have to figure out some way to make it happen.
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I think they would be outwardly disgusted and appalled... and inwardly hot and bothered.
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Yep. http://www.fimfiction.net/story/192027/a-mothers-love-never-dies
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Oh, I have plans. ^.^
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I bet you wish it was for something that interesting!
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Glad to see inspiration happening!
Both BuzzAphin and BuzzFlivvy have strong supporters here... I can only hope I'll be able to make everyone happy.
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It's the good life.
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Begun, the shipping wars have.
I guess I can take that as a compliment, that people are arguing about which OC's should be shipped with which. Must mean I've got decent OC's in here.
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Okay, maybe not arguing. But still... I get the impression that there are strong opinions.
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Who knows... it might happen sooner than you think. Changeling biology is different, after all.
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It'd also be pretty neat if Zilly was paired up with a changeling who was able to tolerate her inexcusable behavior and her attitude began to change because of it.
6186390 I like where this is going.
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That's actually what I intended... but if it's not coming across in the story, I've failed in that regard.
Aww, I liked Aphin and Buzzik. Not that I have an OTP or anything...
Dude, you need to make a story with just aphin and.. Main dude, anyways, make it, she's way to sweet and cute to not have her own time with him.
6258877 it dose seem like she loves who ever fucked her last lol..
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6186815 I'm in agreement with your statement, good sir.
Though I understand why, I almost wish you had a male on male chapter
Haven't even read the chapter yet, and it's obviously a threesome.
Update:
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6258877 There goes my OTP
Huehuehue
holy shit
7292025 I did not laugh