Chrysalis' changelings need to learn every aspect of stealing a pony's love. They enjoy some classes more than others.
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Oh god does this DnD-play make me horny. The only thing that would make this even hotter was if Buzzik were a paladin with 18 percent charisma and 97 hitpoints, and use his helm of disintegration to do one D4 damage as his half-elf mage wields his plus-five holy avenger.
Or a black guy.
Also, I find that closing your eyes unclenching your rectum and thinking about running water helps with the peeing process.
Remember, you gotta be easy if you wanna make a weewee.
And that's a fact.
Huh. If he had known how much he'd cum as a Minotaur he could have easily done both interspecies and Bukkake at the same time.
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I'll be sure to tell Aphin that.
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Missed opportunity, that.
YES! Just, yes! That right there is so freaking sexy. The thought of her trying to pee, even pushing hard enough to be visible, yet nothing coming out due to a shy bladder? Oh my Celestia, so hot.
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Wonder if they will be penalized for it.
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Glad I can ace the fetish even when it's not my fetish!
lovely!
the story fascinates me, though I can not read English so well ^^
Flivvy tease is literally going to cause my heart to stop.
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Glad to hear it. ^.^
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Don't worry, it'll all be over soon.
I love this story so much. I don't have any money, but please, keep going!
Goddammit Aphin! You friggin troll! *angry screeching*
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Heh.
Here Buzzik thought he was finally going to get lucky with his crush, then Aphin butts in and pees on him.
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^.^ The encouragement is still nice.
What's your favorite part of the story so far?
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Why wouldn't she be? ^.^
10/10, best gramma!
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I enjoyed making her. ^.^
Whyyyyyyyyy?!?!
Oh well, the rest is still great, and I can respect having the desire to appeal to a broad audience. I'll just have to wait for the next chapter.
6941490 and she enjoyed carrying Aphin's parent. Whichever one she was responsible for, at least.
6900088 Oh my god...
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Well, yeah, a fetish chapter is always going to be a turnoff for some people.
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Very true. I know some people can't stand my favorite fetish, loving consensual sex in the
missionarymounted position for the purpose of procreation.6941609
Ew, gross!
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Hey... no it's totally cool, just imagine there's cum inflation involved and it results in hyper pregnancy. Then it's totally legit.
Aww... I got all excited when I saw "Asphyxiation." Ah well, it's in the textbook. There is still hope!
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Oh, okay. Phew. Really saved the day there.
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Yeah, unfortunately, there's no way I could ever have time to do everybody's fetishes.
Would be great if the second could appear in the story.
Or something related to the other talking animals of pony land like the sheeps
I feel so naughty for liking this, but I can't stop reading it...
Kudos to you for getting me to read and enjoy clop.
Not as gross or weird as I expected.
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Oh lawd.
I can only imagine the amount of hate I'd get for writing a sheep-fucking story.
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^.^ It's what I do.
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Heh, yeah. I am being a little light on the fetishes.
6941987 Probably for the best sheep don't show up. I hear they're all talk.
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But imagine the self satisfaction you will get knowing that you wrote a story about sheep sex
Okay on second thought that is a bit strange
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That they are... that they are.
And to think, I don't even remember which story that's from.
6941434 well I mean she did just impregnate a young changling not only that the fact that she was impregnated could impact her learning what with all the things that go along with pregnancy or the fact that being put into any more situations like that could both cause ill effects to the ofspring as the unborn would be tied to her physical and emotional state also the fact she could be imprgnated by multiple partners which could lead to birth complications to put it bluntly there's actually quite a few reasons shed not wish to knock her up. All that aside I feel as though she was more of an excuse character to get the situations going also I find it strange she wouldn't have prepared anti pregnancy spells or other such methods to insure her protecting after all she seemed to be a bit more prickly about all of this I also detect a bit of a pre relationship like she's already found some one she like so this situation hurts all the more of course these are all assumption and speculations built in this universe and could all be incorrect.
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Pay no attention to the thinly veiled plot devices behind the curtain!
6941394 which makes it all the sadder I get the feeling this character was either an excuse for easy slide into the clop scenes. Or she was meant to be that bully who gets what she deserves as he says in a chapter or so ago she was kinda mean but if anything that all just made me feel even worse for her she just seemed to have really gotten...scre-....fuc...cheated...she seems to have really been cheated in this deal yea that works like I said in another comment the hole time her parts where shown I kept thinking that she had fallen in love with someone and doing this was just ripping her apart inside...well that and she's basically being raped but yea maybe I was miss reading it but you get what I mean.
How did Buzzik's brothers get home?
Yeah, I'm that guy.
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Pfff, get out of here you lightweight. My favourite fetish is holding hooves. And if I'm feeling really depraved, they're cuddling while they're at it.
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Get out.
Get out right now! We don't need perverts like you degrading our innocent interspecies watersports here on fimfic!
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Changelings are not held back by primitive human notions of 'age of consent'.
Or consent at all, for that matter.
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They didn't. They're still waiting for him to show up, wondering where the hell he is.
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I knew I should have made her more evil.
Then nobody would feel sorry for her.
6941123 I like the character development so far. The interactions between the various characters are really well written.
I hope Buzzik will get an a+ for that.
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At least it wasn't Turkey Basters and Greased Vibrating Watermelons...
Buzzik, ffs bro, listen to this song:
Now go and f****** f*** Flivvy! Argh!
This stuff is so good I'm already kinda bummed it'll be ending soon... Speaking of happy endings, we will eventually get to see Buzzik and Flivvy wreck each other, right? I mean, you wouldn't just dangle it in front of us throughout the entire story and then not deliver. You wouldn't do that to us, right?
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6942113 hehe yes oh great wizard of oz
6942806 aha so she was both a plot device and meant to be the get what you deserve character must admit though it really did play out the other direction I kept feeling bad about what was happening to her. Maybe try some situations were her chacarter becomes something the readers despise a bit more like make her cruel or something idk but yea she got all my feels :/
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It's a simple pass/fail grade.
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It could always be worse.
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Patience, patience.
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Just never seemed to have time and opportunity to show off her cruelty...
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Nobody would blame you.
6947795 sure there is the passing moments between them perhaps while there all waiting to go inside the class there's plenty of chances. It's just important to set up your plot devices and such effectively other wise you'll end up with the wrong result like this for instance. Oh and I haven't checked out your pony style one yet but I plan to soon I'm just hoping it's not somthing predictable but I'll tell you know you really really need to have sold it because with changelings you have a pretty good excuse what with them being changelings and all I'm hoping not to call bull so let's see where it takes us.
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They have legs.
Buzzik is having to haul three of them AND a cart to boot.
If a teenage changeling can do that, then some pre-teens can walk their own asses back home for once.
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Well, I'm afraid Pony Style is a lot less justified than this one...
6974861 -_- oh dear I guess I should buckle up for rape, convienet plot devices, and cliches huh? Oh well depending on how bad it is I could possible mange worse comes to worse I turn my nose up at it and either look at your other stuff or elsewhere wouldn't be the first time. It's funny how easily I can literally rip apart and pick the flaws out of others writing but not my own :/ wonder if it has to do with humans having a tough time confronting ourselves because writing in since comes from us...something to chew on.