Chrysalis' changelings need to learn every aspect of stealing a pony's love. They enjoy some classes more than others.
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I literally looked five minutes ago and it wasn't updated... so glad I saw it on the front page! Now, to get onto reading...
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You're not signed up for updates?
Add it to your tracking bookshelf, silly!
Well, I just finished the chapter and wow, it was great! A great update after so long!
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Eh, it's in my favourites, that's good enough
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I'm waiting for my kiss.
not a bad chapter
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^.^
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I cant believe you named the jelly mare Suu, the same colors too . SOMEBODY has been watching too much "Daily Life with a Monster Girl" huh? http://vignette3.wikia.nocookie.net/dailylifewithamonstergirl/images/5/5e/Suu_colored.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20130722033815
I don't think Pony Style will really do that well, since it's really foalcon, technically.
P.Smoozus
:>
Question: Why did it take so long to write one of your shortest chapters?
If that question sounds offensive, which I think it does, I did not mean it to be so.
Now I want to see clopart of this chapter.
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I'm assuming the reason it took so long is because of Pony Style.
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Probably.
I would masturbate to this but considering my name I...don't think that'd be a good idea.
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6725621 That sounds pretty hot.
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I realized the moment he mentioned Suu.
6725892 and this isn't?
You had way too much fun making that up, didn't you?
6725664 That anime is like the biggest cock tease ever. Illegal to fuck monster girls? Wha?
being sent to the sixth abysmal plane
Did you mean abyssal, or did you do that deliberately?
Seriously science, inter-dimensional portals that will allow us to summon other creatures to fuck. Get on it.
Entertaining chapter. Considering all he's been through, surprised he had much of anything left.
One note, you slip from first to third person at one point:
Totally Suu from MOnster musume isnt it.
6726229 Never stated as such, and thus, never seen them as foals.
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Well, I don't think a whole chapter about that would be a good idea, but I do think I should at least insert (heh) it into the background somewhere.
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Actually, I did that solely to get a kiss from Reykan 6442073
I'd never heard of Suu before then, but I did my research.
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I'm beginning to realize that.
It did feature, though, so maybe it will do well... probably only because it's able to leech popularity off of this story. I kind of doubt it would have done as well standing on its own.
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I did have a lot of fun writing that!
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Yeah, 6726028 is right. It was delayed because I wanted to release it at the same time as Pony Style
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One pump man?
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It's stuff like this that makes writing fun!
I made a new word! Squibbles!
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Yeah, deliberate. ^.^ I was having a lot of fun with that part.
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We have our top men on it.
Top men.
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Aw, damn... I need to fix that.
There used to be more, but I got most of them.
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6726754 I thought that name was familiar!
6728014 Sounds about right.
Cya
Raziel-chan
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There is a F/F chapter. ^.^
Omg....
Really man?
Suu?
I facepalmed and laughed.
Monster Musume Love it!! Dude this story is amazing same with the sequel!!
Ya know, I realize I'm gonna catch flak for this, but I just gotta say this.
Why in god's name do we have like a million generic clop-fics on this damn site, with a 100-1 like/dislike ratio, and then have a handful of beautifully written novels with a 3-1 like dislike ratio? Wtf everybrony?
(I'm not saying this story in particular is generic, I'm just saying in general...)
6728563 so did you ever got your kiss?
Why can't real life be more like fanfics?
orig10.deviantart.net/7dc0/f/2015/230/b/2/suu_by_dorcarthewarrior-d966z77.jpg Suu is the best jellymare!
6734699 yes, I realise that homosexuality applies to both males and females, but I didn't think that I would have to fucking specify that I meant dudes having sex. I made no 'improper assumptions', I just had enough faith in the other people on this site that I thought they'd know what I meant. Evidently not.
6731202 It just can't... Wish it could though
Suu, Heheh.
Another nice chapter. Buzzik's lil' Buzzy's gonna start hurting if he keeps getting laid so often.
Cya
Raziel-chan
6734708 Regardless of what you may be implying, improper usage is improper.
Cya
Raziel-chan
6735111 Not really. I would assume you know about the saying "No Homo!"?
6735095 so true dude, but imagine stories like cupcakes or rainbow factory coming to real life though
6736161 ... Yeah totally
Dude.
Update: Jesus Christ. Fucking incredible.
6735688 apparently not.
6735111 do you say that to every person that's ever said "no homo" around you, since you obviously don't know what it means? The term itself is, generally, exclusive to males. I doubt that anyone has ever looked at a lesbian and said "dude, she's a homo". Homosexuality isn't gender specific, but the actual word "homo", as far as I know, is exclusive to males. So when I said "no homo for me", I meant it as in I didn't want to read about two dudes having sex. If I said "no homosexuality for me", then it would have been improper use of the term, but since I only said "no homo" the term exclusive to males, then it isn't improper in the slightest.
Cya.
6739367 IM SO GLAD SOMEONE ELSE NOTICED!
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Well, you should read on. Because there is a M/M chapter.
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Sure, why not?
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I just did it for the kiss!
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Most of my nice novels have a 10-1 like/dislike ratio or better... and generally, my clopfics have a worse ratio than my non-clop stories.
You just have to write good stories.
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No!
And I'm very upset about that.
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^.^ People put so much thought into this!
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That sounds good, until you're stuck in a terrible Mary Sue fic... and you're not the Sue.
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I'm sure he'll be fine.
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That's an oddly appropriate image there.
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Let me know if there's anything I can do about that neediness...
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Oh, I think it's worth your time.
At least a lot of other people here like it.
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Aw, she'll be fine.
Excellently executed arousal-erecting chapter as always! This chapter is now one of my favorite chapters in the story, and Jellymare!Suu was an awesome reference to 'Monster Musume no Iro Nichijou' no matter who thought to add it in (and kudos for them to adding it as well!)!
I'm also now interested in what other kinds of otherworldly erotic creatures from other dimensions might be summoned next. Just think of all the perverted possibilities that have opened up thanks to this chapter! Fingers crossed for a Montser Girl Encyclopedia reference next time 'round, or maybe even a supernatural sex idol/object of incredible pleasurable power!
I'd also be interested to see if there could be an eventual crossover with this story and the new one (even if I still haven't read 'Sex Ed: Pony Style' just yet) where Buzzik has to go on a little "Field Trip" to Ponyville and gets a little in too deep (pun totally intended) for his troubles. Though I'd still be more or less fine if you just decided to keep them separate from each other.
Lastly, sorry I'm a little late in reviewing and how my review for this chapter is somewhat long, but I hope you and everybody on this site are doing fine and are having a great New Year so far! Can't wait to see what happens next to our favorite love bug Buzzik! You rock author brah, Peace Out!
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Heh, I think this will be the last chapter that features summoning supernatural creatures, though that would be a fun idea for a spin-off.
And I do sort-of-kind-of have plans to unite the two stories at the end by having the characters of one encounter the characters of the other.
Not sure how that's going to go yet, and maybe I'll even make it a separate story, a threequel.