Chrysalis' changelings need to learn every aspect of stealing a pony's love. They enjoy some classes more than others.
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My mind was screaming the entire time that it's Flivvy.
And if it is, I'm curious to know if Flivvy knows it's Buzzik or if it just happened by chance xD
Commence read.
Just have to chalk it up to coincidence?
Oh God......Its Flivvy, It has to be........shhhiiiiiiiit.
Well, I'm sorry for Buzzik, cus he totally mated with another changeling...
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Spoilers!
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If not coincidence, then what?
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^.^ Things were going well... and not so well.
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It happens.
7204185 Friendly fire?
Ah. Friendly fire with benefits.
Buzzick, you dun-goofed!
So if Buzzik hooked up with Summer, and Summer = Flivvy, will they both fail?
(I don't know if the changelings in this story can identify other changelings in pony disguise.)
Oh Buzzik... if everything is too good to be true, then it is. Oh well, you and Flivvy will get to bond over being the next class' playthings.
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And won't that be fun to watch! ^.^
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That's the idea.
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It happens.
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Heh, I'm loving that phrase now.
What would be truly ridiculous and/or hilarious would be having our suspicions confirmed...except it happens to literally everyone.
7204191 I meant, class gimp incoming.
I have two hypothesis for his bad feeling.
1) The mare was actually Flivvy or another changling.
or
2) He forgot to gather love during the encounter and has nothing to give Chrysalis.
I'm betting it is the first one.
I'm calling it; that's Flivvy.
Also, I have to wonder; wouldn't all of them flocking to a single town be the opposite of inconspicuous?
I am very curious to see what the reaction is going to be when the two of them and Queen Chrysalis find out what happened.
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lulz Heh, you'd think it would happen pretty often, huh?
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That's not a bet I'd be willing to go against.
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I see my hints/callback were well-placed.
(If you look back to the very first chapter, the first physical description of Flivvy, you might notice some similarities to the description of Summer.)
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I'm looking forward to it myself. ^.^
It would be funny if neither of them knew it was the other, and they thought their partner was a pony.
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If I didn't know better, I'd say one of my Patreon supporters leaked the outline for the next chapter.
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Depends. The Queen's looking for love energy, right?
They might just get a pass. Depends on how her sense of humor's feeling that particular day.
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Depending on Queen Chrysalis' sense of humor is perilous indeed.
So, assuming the very, very implied is true (Summer is at least a changeling)... can't changelings recognise eachother when they are disguised?
Dunno, that would seem like a pretty important thing, no?
Thinking further, do Changelings also provide this love energy, then? Since I assume that changelings know if they have tapped love energy, and MC not thinking he doesn't have any would imply that MC at least thinks he has tapped enough, so... yeah.
7204346 queen stole identity, didn't know who twilight was... Yeah
No greatest spy's.
Is it bad I could tell it was Flivvy from the very first sentence in which Summer was introduced? It was waaay too obvious. Though I can only presume that it was meant to be a surprise / reveal in the end...
7204391 no it is just somewhat obvious that summer is a changeling
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Nope!
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Heh, good point.
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I guess it's bad... I meant it to be a bit more subtle in the hints. You were still supposed to figure it out, but it was supposed to be tricky enough for you to feel clever for having done so.
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Hey, you're interfering with my shameless Patreon plug!
The whole time he was with her I kept muttering over and over again, "It's Flivvy..."
I get to the end and all I can think of is, "I hope you enjoyed that because I have a feeling Chysi is going to connect the dots."
Please tell me there is going to be an epilogue for Buzzik though.
7204491 Great point. This does seem like the kind of thing cannon Chysalis would do.
After three months:
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Pretty sure Chrysalis was lying when she said the previous class all passed. I'm betting that most of this class just boinked a disguised changeling. Although, I was kinda hoping he would have tried to seduce Twilight, who would in turn be all sorts of goofy adorkableness-- but yeah, it's common sense that everyling would be warned about her. Oddly enough, no ling was told about Pinkie however. (Pink's got lucky that night, woo! One of those changelings will be walking home sore the next day...)
Oh well, better luck next season Buzzik, eh?
7204549 please don't take this the wrong way but, I actually expected this outcome from the second chapter so I knew this was coming after he passed up Twilight.
It's Zilly isn't it?
It was her plan to find and seduce him and hope the Queen accepts it.
Jeez, he sure it's slow to connect the dots.
7204549 oh shit sorry
I fuckin knew it was another changeling from the time she said she was new in town.....DAMMIT BUZZIK!
I've only got to where he meets breeze, but I'm calling that breeze is Zilly
Whelp, they're screwed. But seeing as how they'd been doing that since class had first started I don't think that they'd object to much about it. Still, at the very least I hope that the black leather doesn't chafe their chitin too badly.
7205732 Agreed.
Also, really glad that your Patreons convinced you to continue this story. And, even though I don't have a Patreon account and would not have enough money to pay anybody even if I did, I still hope to give you some good ideas for this story regardless. If you don't mind that is.
Like maybe after failing and spending a few days as the class's Gimps, Buzzik undertakes a special, seemingly impossible assignment from Chrysalis to get him and Flivvy out of the predicaments. Specifically by seducing and bedding a certain prodigious purple Alicorn perhaps? Or what about a familiar pink-haired princess from the tundra?
Or maybe Buzzik and Flivvy both get banished and have to depend on each other to survive, all the while blossoming their love for each other while seducing the random ponies (and other sapient species) that come (heh) their way and attempting to either rescind their banishment or find a new home for themselves.
I'm also kinda curious what kind of class the Changelings would go to next after finishing Chrysalis'. Like whether they get a similar, more "advanced" class to go to or if they simply don't need to do those types of classes anymore.
Anyway, keep the the awesome (and sexy) work! Looking forward to see what your beautiful brain comes up with next.
... Pretend that sounded erotic and not at all creepy or unsettling.
You'd think they would check if the pony they're talking to is another ling, that's like, infiltration 102...
The fact that neither "Pegasus" were good at cloud forming at all, the "I'm new in town/just passing through", the instant sex.... Goofed doesn't even begin to describe these two
Keep going! ;)
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Oh yes, there's more.
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This happens when you do a really long story one chapter at a time.
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That Pinkie scene might be a fun side-story.
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I hope you expected it! ^.^ I've been laying the groundwork for this for a long time.
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Zilly, huh? You're all sure?
That's interesting...
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He's still in training.
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Nah it'll chafe. Chryssy isn't interested in making the changelings she's punishing comfortable.
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Oh, my jimmies have been rustled...
7206145 well it's not what I want but Zilly had a plan and it would be too good if it were Flivvy
He's boned. Boned, boned , so very boned.
Burn everything
Fuck
How did he not immediately catch on, especially since they all went to the same fucking town, where everyone knows everyone
I need a moment
I honestly feel bad for these schmucks, i know that Chrysalis probably won't be merciful but i'm hoping against hope that she does take pity.
The memory scene is going to be one big oh shit moment for Buzzik once he recognizes his own disguise.
Would Chrysalis know it was Flivvy? If she does find out, would they both get in trouble? Or just Flivvy for tricking him?
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Because one memory will involve a pegasus with a grey coat and a blue mane screwing another pegasus with a pink coat and pale mane...
And another memory will involve a pegasus with a pink coat and pale mane screwing another pegasus with a grey coat and a blue mane.
I really do hope we get to see Buzzik as the class gimp, even just for a little while.
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He's not the only one who's boned. If you know what I mean. Wink wink.
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Aw, don't feel too bad. They are having fun!