Chrysalis' changelings need to learn every aspect of stealing a pony's love. They enjoy some classes more than others.
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The referral stats on this story are interestingly international...
130 hits from google Canada
108 hits from google UK (Okay, those two make sense; english speaking countries and all...)
64 hits from google Romania (what now?)
57 hits from google Poland (huh?)
53 hits from google Mexico (what?)
Then 34 and 21 from Australia and New Zealand.
Lots of google searches from Romania, Poland, and Mexico... I didn't see that coming!
Another hot chapter!
But just a thought...
"Orifice" refers to holes, in this case in bodies.
Nostrils are orifices... Same goes to every possible hole in the body, sexual or not.
I do get you imaging it coming out of the holes in their hooves though.
6440387
Well, there was quite a lot of it...
I mean, probably they didn't have any coming out of their ears... but I wouldn't guarantee that.
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Well I'm sure that's someone's fetish if so anyway.
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Why surprised about Poland and other countries?
Hm, wonder if Chrysalis is gonna try using the male sex toys next time.
... Not that I know any of them or what they're called or use them or anything like that. Ha ha ha ha....
... Though if it does come (ha) to that then may I make a suggestion of Chrysalis using the technique of putting several eggshell vibrators into a condom then putting it on her bitc- I mean Buzzi- I mean student's phallus? It's pretty much the male equivalent of what she did to Zilly.
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Well, I just mean, why Poland of all places?
Other than this, of course:
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Heh... I thought about it, but the chapter is already pretty long, and I really just don't... Well, I don't find the use of male sex toys very erotic personally, I suppose.
Very hot chapter.
jellymare???
me like!
6440460
I'd rather ask why google and not on site searchbar. Also just bumped Poland to 69 hits because I live there and nobody's going to say I can't.
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You'll see in the next chapter!
6440475
Thanks! ^.^ I'd guess from your pic you enjoy some tentacles!
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I'm looking forward to that one!
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Well alrghtey, then. At least now I now why Poland is showing up.
Everything about this is my fetish.
6440751
Everything? Heh, wow. I done good.
6440730 Yes I kinda do but not the reason for my profile pic.
this is kinda hot, good job.
I remember reading the first two chapters and forgetting to bookmark it or something, bless the story's feature
So... just wondering, but is that... whatever it was, really called a "dong" in real life? If so... I'm not sure wether I should laugh or cry.
Also, jellymare? Looking forward to it.
jellymare.... slimegirl?
purrururur fufufu
6440337 YYYYAAAAAYYYYYY <3 thank you. I am glad I could soften you up and make you a little happier :)
Isn't Zilly pregnant? You'd think Chrysalis would give her a break.
6440387
Ever choke on soda? Think about having that soda being fired into your mouth/throat. The second you choke on it, its going to find another route.
DLS, I will kiss you if the jellymare is called suu
What no tentacles for the stallions?
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Thanks! ^.^
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I like this one. It features on every chapter update!
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I'm looking forward to the next chapter too! ^.^
(And it's a bit of a slang term, but yes.)
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Oh yes.
This guy knows what it means.
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No breaks! No mercy!
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I don't see why not. ^.^ When you're summoning eldrich beings from alternate dimensions, you never know quite what you'll get.
I'm going to get that kiss, though!
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Maaaaybe.
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Well, they've had a hard couple chapters as far as getting penetrated goes, so I thought I'd give them a break.
Chrysalis is a very horny changeling... And yes I just realized that.
6442533 as long as there is a scene with tentacles, on males I'm good.
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The horniest changeling of them all!
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Such a scene is not guaranteed.
Maybe a light bit of that in the next chapter, though.
6442616 yeah most definitively!
Why have we not developed means of going to other dimensions to collect creatures specifically for sexual pleasure? Science, why have you failed me?!
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Well i did play a game called MGQ
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....why have we not invented timetravel so we can go into the future when thats invented.
AND THEN use it
Extra credit for summoning tentacles too.
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Don't worry. They're working on it.
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Who says jellymares don't have a tentacle or two?
What do you think their manes and tails are made of?
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I was suggesting why not use both spells.
Jellymare...hmmm...
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I'm pretty sure they're made of jelly. Or possibly slime.
Oddly enough, not many goo/jelly fics on this site, when I looked for them.
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So... The next chapter.... We get to find out why that one pony was "strangely obsessed with tubs of jel-ly"
ok... Well that... certainly explains the look on his face... He looks very satisfied.
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Please, carry on.
This made me laugh harder than I probably should have
I have to say, I'm not necessarily a fan of clop, but this story's pretty entertaining, if for no other reason that I'd like to see our hero end up with his love interest. I also have to add that I truly enjoy how you write Chrysalis. I love that she's so charmingly sadistic! You've done a great job keeping me engaged, which speaks volumes about your ability as an author that writes clop. Keep up the good work.
~Lithe
Gotta say, I really enjoyed this. Not in just a cloppy way but it was hilarious as well. At first glance I couldn't find anything seriously wrong with it.
I enjoy the tension I perceive between Zilly and Buzzik. I don't know if you meant to write them that way but I enjoy it.
Aphib is adorable too.
6440361 well should have expected that because MLP is international and your covering almost every fetish
Atleast all the common fetishs not the biting fetish
͈̰̜̣̭̄ͨͩ̄̅̐̀͘͡
I̛̹̟̞̜̜̠͎͑͆̈ͩ͠͞ ͎̞͖̳ͣͨͫm̝̺ͥͪ̋̋̈́͗̓̿̌ͅ ̮̘̰̭̭̳̙͗̈́̒͞a̙̩͈̮̱̜̺͗ ̵̳͚̝̬̬̞̽̿̃͐ͣ̒ͧ̅͟͡B̖̺̭̈́ͤ̈͝ỡ̬ͤ̄̅g͋̓̿̊͒ͥ̐ͤ̿҉͏̩̟̟̥̖e̴̍ͩ̓͒̿͂͏͔̹̦̹y̡̲̬͌̐̆̾ ̛͚̗̫̣͙̲̦̋ͥ́̀M̳͚͉̱̅͐̐́̚͞a̳̻̪̹̗̗͗͗ͥ͂̌͆̓̔̕͜n̳͈̤̫̳̻͔̠̬̄̕͟͜
͛͊ͤ͑̃̊ͦ͊͊҉̤͜....
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6441501 no because remember it only takes an month for the process to finish and the Boom child and I'm assuming thats he's only writing the good stuff
Which leaves a bout a couple days without Data in the cyber verse
ARG! Why didn't I read this sooner?!
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I guess the moral of this story is "Don't be a bitch in changeling land."
Uh, hopefully Buzzik and Zilly never have sex again, for Buzzik's sake. She is gonna have some pent up rage she will want to unleash on our poor protagonist.
Chrysalis is wicked and I love it.
I would be winking like a bitch in heat...
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Eh... I have written worse in comments.
I was thankfully not drinking anything when I read this.
Need a space here.
The uncropped cover picture?
I am imagining something kinda like this for Aphin.
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I wonder who gets to clean the room...
So Zilly, Flivvy, and Aphin have the dat off. I wonder what they will do? Aphin, Buzzik, Flivvy, and a jellymare maybe?
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We're holding you to that OP.
This has proven to be consistent, shameless, fetish fodder of clopfiction... and for that I tip my hat to you.
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Oy. That sounds exhausting to write.
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Oh yes.
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Well, there's going to be one more soon!
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Nice of you to inform us. ^.^
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I hope the rest entertains you just as much!
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Well, now I want to make a story specifically about that.
You've made my idea list longer!
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I do like to have fun when I write. ^.^
6454323
Wow, now that's some flattery!
Thanks!
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Oh, this one I'm making up as I go along, and I'm finding out about them as you do.
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You want biting? Because there can be biting. ^.^
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I am leaning that way also.
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I'm greatly enjoying the line-by-line comments.
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Truly, majestic creatures.
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I try. ^.^
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Ah, thank you. I could use one of those as I write the next chapter.
6498447 I'm happy to be of service/distraction
6498447
Well I do hope that my comments entertain at least one other person than myself.
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I used to think poorly of it as well.
Then I had some from someone who really knows how to do it.
Now it's awesome!
6442666 Well, maybe because in the real world dimensions are not places, but a direction of movement.