Chrysalis' changelings need to learn every aspect of stealing a pony's love. They enjoy some classes more than others.
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Ah! I love how I can update this and it's in the feature box instantly. ^.^
Hot damn!
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^.^
Hot.
6059963 can't wait for the next chapter!
What I got from this chapter: Alphin is being cute, Chrysalis has seemingly one willing mare (Assuming pony? Don't think It was specified.) in her harem, and I see... Adventures, in our dear protagonist's future. Which may include several mates.
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The more you update it, the more we'll keep coming back!
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That lucky son of a changeling. He already has 4 mares, who have the hots for him, after just 2 days of sex-ed. Let´s see where this is going.
not only is this hot, it's educational....there's a lot going on here so hard to keep up
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Thanks! ^.^ I try.
If there's anything in particular you liked, I'd love to hear about it.
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Oh yes. Much adventures in the future. ^.^
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It's nice to have loyal readers!
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I thought that the warning might just have some people excited. ^.^
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He's one lucky bug, sure.
But I think we all know where this is going!
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Even this chapter was educational?
And here I thought it had very little educational content.
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Yeah, I guess so. but just in case anyone doesn´t you should keep it a dirty little secret´s dirty little secret Secret-cetion. Bwaaaaaaaah!
Awwwwwwwwwww~!
The two young lovers compensating for last time, so adorable!
6060099 Also, I'm not even surprised that there's a willing mare in Chrysalis' Harem. Maybe she has a fetish? Maybe she's actually in love? (To Love A Monster, Is To Love Thyself.)
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^.^ This chapter felt really bland to me... until I came up with that idea.
I love the contrast between the debauchery of what Chrysalis is doing and the hesitant innocence of what they're doing.
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It's something you grow to enjoy, I'm sure.
I'm loving all the comments about how badly Chrysalis is treating certain members of the class. You guys remember that she's a villain right? You know, the one who kidnapped and impersonated pink princess, brainwashed her husband, laid siege to Canterlot with the intent of enslaving all ponies in Equestria to harvest their love e.t.c. Is it really so surprising she's a huge bitch to the changelings too?
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It is well known that all villains must be redeemed all the time.
6060256 Sure, but the general statement of "You again?" Kinda struck some weird chord. I recognize the scenario, but I can't wreck my brain enough to remember wherefrom.
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Don't strain too hard. ^.^
I wasn't referencing anything; just making things up off the top of my head.
I read the first sentence of the first chapter, that's when the grenade was thrown into mind.
6060459 Oh well. Although, is the mare broken, or there of her own will is the question I am curious about.
First chapter he said nobody liked him because he was an outsider. Then proceeds to get a load of mares in 2 days.
I guess he was wrong.
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Well, I guess I'm doing good with opening sentences, then.
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I'm curious, too! ^.^ Maybe in future chapters, we'll both find out.
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Well, we'll see. He's still a bit awkward about it, and I don't think he knows what he has.
This is like dakka.
you can never have too much.
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Had to look that up.
I ain't even mad. I now know a fun meme. ^.^
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Damn right you're good with openings. Our stories are shit, 90% guaranteed.
Stop making me love everything about this fic!
It's too good for me~
Every chapter I hit the like button at the bottom, to bad I can only hit it once!
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Is that so?
Let's take a look at the opening line of your only story:
Well...
-It's not a long day as the sun vanishes; it was a long day before the sun vanished. Whenever you use the word 'as', you're saying two things happened at the same time, and it doesn't work in that context.
-Verb tense disagreement between the implied 'has been' (a variation of past tense) and 'vanishes' (present tense).
-That 'and' needs to be replaced by a comma.
-Somewhat of a weather report opening, which is a cliche.
-It has nothing to grab the attention, other than a bit of poetic prose. It could be okay, but it would be better if we knew who had a long day, or if we could just jump into whatever makes the story unusual or new, or at least hint at that.
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You want me to stop?
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^.^ Glad you're enjoying it!
What's your favorite part?
6060969 Please, leave, before I beg you to stay
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Holy crap...I just realized how bad I am with literature. I speak it, but I can't write nor type it.
I already tell this gonna be good
All I have to say is...
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Also, can't wait for homework 3.
6059924 The featured box always get's horny when reading this XD
I never thought I'd ever read (well, I have, but never admitted to) clop until I saw this title. I HAD TO READ IT!
And now, I do not regret it at all.
Although something tells me, our Dirty Little Secret (See what I did there? XD) is writing out of experience rather than the will to write such a thing.
good job. This might be the first, and only clop fic, that I have liked, Favorited and WAITED for more.
Good thing Flivvy didn't notice.
Shit.
That warning at the top. Am I just slow, or was there no warning for any of the previous chapters? Cause if I'm not wrong we came all this way with nary a disclaimer.
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Heh, yeah... this chapter was a bit over-the-top.
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Wow, I didn't know the title was that good! ^.^
But, hey, that's what makes any clopfic good. Sex is sex; it's the situation around it that makes it interesting.
I swear, on my honor, that I have never had sex with a changeling. That I know of. (They do disguise themselves, after all.)
That said, yes, I do have a bit of experience. I think you really have to if you want to write any kind of erotica. Call it research if you want, but knowing what you're writing about lets you put an authenticity into it that would otherwise be sorely lacking. When you see a virgin trying to write erotica, it's often painfully obvious.
Well, if you want more, I do have a few other stories you could peruse.
The Relapse and Pinkie Pie's Party Surprise are particularly good. They might give you something to enjoy while you're waiting for the next update on this one.
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I had initially planned on them getting away with it, but that moment was just too good to pass up.
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After some complaints from readers, I've started putting those in whenever there's anything extreme or fetishy (more fetishy than changeling sex, anyway). This is the second chapter to get one, and the first chapter to have one from the moment it was first posted.
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Very forgivable.
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I hope you enjoy what you find!
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I'm pretty sure I don't want to know why you need 3 hands.
(Protip: Get your significant other to help out with that 3rd hand. You know which one.)
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You'll get better with practice and education. ^.^
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I appreciate your constructive criticism. I was surprised you actually took time to take a look at my work, and I appreciate that very much. Your words have encouraged me to keep writing while learning something new in literary arts.
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Well, My thinking when I saw the title was "Hm... I've been through quite some mentally scaring stuff in sex ed. I wonder how changelings have it." And after the first chapter, I could not stop.
I've quite a few things in my life. And I have come to hate a few. One of those, is when virgins write erotica. Even though, I myself am a virgin, I can tell, if the writer knows what he/she is talking about.
While they both look pretty good, I think I'll read Relapse first. For obvious reasons. XD
I too, write long comments!
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Here, step right into this cocoon here, sir. Mind the slime.
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Of course. ^.^
I enjoy helping people.
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Heh, yeah. It's lucky I have more Chryssy clop already in stock. ^.^
And, honestly, that's the best clopfic I've ever written, anyway. Yes, it's better than this one.
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MUST READ.
Well, I'm off to bed, but I will read it before I sleep!
Nice chapter, but there's a minor typo.
That should be "ask".
6061524 Oh, I had thought that to be intentional.
If this is how changelings treat sex I'm surprised there isn't just a bunch of public fucking going on.
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Oops! Fixed now.
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You people have way too much faith in me!
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Who says there isn't?
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I'd say he did better than Buzzik.
So far, each chapter has been better than the last.
Although, topping this one is going to be tough.
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You're telling me!
I do fear that I might have extended too far, too quickly, leaving little room to grow.
But we'll see. We'll see. Luckily for me, I'm not worrying about that just yet. Finishing this chapter is enough for one day.