• Member Since 23rd May, 2013
  • offline last seen 7 hours ago

dirty little secret


I tried so far… and got so hard… but in the end, it didn't even matter at all. (Direct Support)

Comments ( 213 )

Vinni viddi vinni.

:ajsmug:

Applejack paused at the door and turned around, grinning. “Remember what I said 'bout pullin' the loose end?” She stepped out, closing the door behind her. “Good luck with that!”

:pinkiesad2: "B-but it's my birthday"

4128717
The fourth wall can't even contain her. You really think a few ropes are going to hold Pinkie long? :pinkiecrazy:

4128909

:pinkiecrazy: And now she's coming for you because you didn't have Applejack untie the ropes ♥

Better write some extra kinky sex to slow her pursuit down~

4128937
:twilightoops: dat reply speed

On a relevant note, I really enjoyed this story. Perhaps you could make so Applejack doesn't say "WELL TOO BAD" for every other response to Pinkie's 'mmrph'ing

4128937 Also, considering her situation in the last chapter, don't ya think it'll be Twilight coming for her?

Unless she was competent enough to get out of those ropes in enough time to come back down stairs so no one knew about the intercourse withheld on the second story of their humble home fit for a celebration in which the characters had indulged in within this fictional story that coincides with the events of the existing fictional television broadcasts... n' stuff.

4129034
:duck: Let's see if I can hold it. :raritywink:

4128972
Um.. yeah. :rainbowderp:
What you said.

That is some good clop lol:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

4129307 while it is good there is always room for improvement, though in this case there is little to be improved upon, such is the high caliber of this work. I really like the story so far though can't wait to read more.

4129364

there is always room for improvement

Of course.

That's why I love getting comments!
If you spot anything, be sure to let me know. :twilightsmile:

Oh please tell me you might do a little futa-filly on stallion pegging... Something about it that makes me moist....:twilightblush:

Trololololol lololol lololol

there's titties in the cover art

4130296 your icon scares me.

4129590
Sorry, no stallions here.

4129791
Isn't it there already? :rainbowhuh:
Even though I intended to, I think somebody else added it before I even got around to it.

4129992
Appletroll?

4130296
This is 100% necessary.

4130524
Me too, a little.

That was quite good, Twilight managed to be sexy and cute (in that inexperienced kind of way) at the same time.:twilightsmile:

*saves for later*

see you later! ho ho ho!

Comment posted by Princess Cadence deleted Apr 29th, 2015

4131878
Yay for no stallions! I had to stop going to equestria after dark because it turned to +50% gay stuff.

Hmmm...I am curious as to who is next...Guess I will find out.

Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work.

congratulations on getting featured.

Yeah, um...:twilightblush: I'm gonna give this a like and a fave, then change articles of clothing.

Murr~ :3

Im quite curious who will get her share of the new and improved Pinkie 2.0 next. :pinkiehappy:

Holy fuck this story is some of the hottest shit I've seen here for a while...
...uh, I mean, good job... pretty nice... I'm totally not into anthro... or futafics... nope...
...
...not quite convincing you am I?

Nice chapte- FUCK, ALL OVER MY KEYBOARD AGAIN!

Er, I mean, nice chapter, I'm liking it! :trixieshiftleft: :trixieshiftright:

(I need to clean the keys on this thing...) :rainbowlaugh:

...Am I seriously the only person on Fimfiction that does not have a fetish for penis ponies? This is an inquiry that I would like to have answered.

Comment posted by Sonic Derpboom deleted Mar 26th, 2014
Comment posted by The Gardenhead deleted Mar 26th, 2014

4135242 Dude, that's roll playing. According to Knighty, you can be banned for that. Just looking out for you.

4132658
[sensual typing intensifies]

4132665
Good, just what I was going for. :twilightsheepish:

4132871
I'll be waiting! :pinkiecrazy:

4133478
<.<
>.>
Don't click on my story, 'Something New'. :rainbowlaugh:

4133495
4134000
Well, if you'd like to know... too bad, because I'm keeping the suspense about it. ^.^

4133501
I'll do my best. ^.^
I fear the next one may be the weakest chapter in the fic, but it should still be pretty good.

4133710
4133805
Sadly, though, my other clopfic of the day didn't feature.
So, I have not yet achieved my goal of 'two fics in the feature box at the same time'.

4133922
Make sure you bring extras tomorrow! ^.^

4134130
Not quite.
Who doesn't like anthro futa?

4134915
Better keep a few spare keyboards handy. There's more where that came from! :pinkiecrazy:

4135063
Yes, yes you are the only one.

(To give a serious answer, though... The show has a lack of good, well-developed stallion characters. So, if good old-fashioned penetrative sex is what lights your fire, you're stuck with using background characters or overused cliches. With the magic of futa, though, you can use these lovely female characters we have and still get that 'straight' sex you like. Everybody wins. That's why everyone here loves futa so much. Personally, I don't find the whole 'chick with a dick' to be any sexier than your standard stallion-on-mare action... but it is a suitable substitute, and it lets me use a much better selection of canon characters.)

4135262

Least you accomplished what I cannot.

Comment posted by Ambrosia_Firehoof13 deleted Mar 26th, 2014

4135262 Good. I am just curious...It doesn't bother me to wait. It never really has.

4135262 I most definitely will. :raritywink: Great story. Maybe one day, I'll do a reading for it on YouTube. How's that sound? I'll have to get my shit together, though. Due to a lot of stress, Brony Readings is a no no for the time being.

4135296
You've never featured? :fluttershysad:
Makes me feel bad for trying to hog the whole box.

4135370
Well, I hope you'll enjoy it. ^.^

4135421
...Hearing some guy read my own clopfic back to me... :applejackunsure:
Not sure how I feel about that.

4135503 Well, if you don't like the idea of it on YouTube, it's okay. I understand.

4135503

Some people are meant for it I suppose.

I have to say I love it! :pinkiehappy: :ajsmug: :twilightsmile: :raritywink: I very much applaud your use of Pinkie as the futa, she can be a bit difficult to work with in clop as I have noticed, also you nailed Twilight's perceptive eye in my opinion.

In short and liked, favorited

4135512
Oh, I don't mind it being on youtube! I'd be happy for the publicity, and flattered that you'd think my fic is worth reading, especially with how long it is.

It's just... I dunno... I've never listened to audio erotic fiction before... certainly not my own... and certainly not in a man's (I assume you're male) voice.
:twilightoops:

4135545
Anybody can, though. You've just gotta put in the effort.
My first feature box came as a surprise, and probably only made it because of the unique concept....
My second (and this, my third), though, I was sure both of them would feature before I ever hit the submit button. It's because of how much effort I've put into refining them.
One in a Million, my second featured, I put about 9 months of work into.
This one... *checks* ... I've been working on since January 12th this year. Heck, you know that I've put a lot of refining into it, being one of my editors!

When skill and hard work combine, that's where the magic happens.
(And the skill itself is the result of a lot of hard work, too.)
If you've got the skills, then put in the hard work, and I think It'll happen for you, too.

Login or register to comment