Chrysalis' changelings need to learn every aspect of stealing a pony's love. They enjoy some classes more than others.
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Okay, this will definitely be the last chapter I manage to post before EFNW. Thanks for reading, everyone!
Me: "What the... what is this?!"
Brain: "Ooh, goodie! Another one! Time to read!"
Me: "I can't read this. I have to prove my friends wrong."
Brain: "Your friends won't know. Just a little peek, how about it?"
Me: "What? No, I can't read this!"
Brain: "Yes, you can. Look, you're doing it now."
Me: "NOOOOOOOOOOO!"
That, my friends, is the sound of inner turmoil.
~ Wolfram Alpha
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Thanks! ^.^
What do you like best about it?
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Give into it, let your passions be free.
Why resist? Because society says you should? Don't let them control you.
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You're going to EFNW?
I'll see you there, man. ^.^
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I'll be going by the name 'ocalhoun' there.
You can find me at the Beggining Writers panel and at the Attracting an Audience panel. ^.^
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I'll keep a lookout. My badge will have "Pandora Typography".
Slight difference, but I'll be sure to say hi or do a quick nod on your general direction.
That was incredibly hot. He's going to have a harem of his own going on here soon.
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Heh, sort of. ^.^
Aww, that was actually kinda cute.
6008536 EFNW?
And I killed my conscience.
Quite the conundrum our little changeling is in. Excellent chapter.
Shouldn't the name of this chapter be "Homework 2: Pony Copulation"?
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OOooo-hoo-hoo, I'm excited already.
This... Okay this was undeniably fucking adorable between Buz and Flivvy.
Interesting, the fillies emotional attachment to Buzzik....
Keep going! ;)
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^.^ I try.
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Good for you! ^.^
And that's Everfree NW, a convention that will be happening soon. I'll be on a couple panels there.
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But it's a good conundrum to be in.
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Nope. The day's lesson went a little long this time.
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Well, don't hold your breath. It's going to take a long time.
I'm on page 30-something of the outline, and barely 1/4 of the way through it.
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I will, I will.
well done.
Amazing chapter again! Also, Buzzik's thoughts and feelings are really well worked.
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Thanks! ^.^
What was your favorite part?
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Glad I'm still managing to do it well. ^.^
Very good story.
The part I'm looking forward to is when Buzzik has to seduce and bed a real pony. I'm wondering who he will seduce and I hope it is Twilight. It was said earlier that he was the one who splashed Twilight with mud so he needs to apologize and make it up to her.
6008835 Cool. Damn. Us bronies, we're like Trekkies!
Fantastic.
So Flivvy and Aphin? They seem to at least be friends and both are eying Buzzik, they don't seem to be jealous of each other. Does that mean a threesome is about to form?
6009317 honestly that's tough to say. But I'm leaning towards some of the romance in the air... Or lust...? Idk but education is a hell of a time.
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What? I am sorry is it Flivvy or Zilly?
That's so cuuuute.
This turned a bit sad...
6010122 Hope not.
Defloration and distention? Muh dick.
So... why does Chrysalis say "mares" and "stallions"?
I mean, this may be a bit weird but (scratch that, it definitly is a weird question)... these are obviously pony names, yes? And, in the show, she mentioned she has been to others places before Equestria, and probably had to impersonate other races, so... wouldn't it make sense that they have normal (for their race) gender names, instead of adopting them from the host-race?
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Flivvy WAS in front of him, but because Zilly was moved out of the line from elsewhere, every mare moved down one.
This just keeps getting better, the whole thing was very hot.
Also I'm getting a Hinata vibe off of Alphin (adorable girl who is into a guy who likes other girl)
I can't even clop to this. It's too real. Poor Alphin, though better Buzzik than some uncaring mook.
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Interesting thought... but Twilight will have to wait until the sequel to the sequel of this.
(The sequel of this has been written; the threequel has not made it past the outline stage yet.)
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Heh, I bet it is.
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Thanks! ^.^
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Nope. Well, a threesome will form, but Flivvy won't be in it. This Buzzik x Flivvy ship is my overriding dramatic tension for the whole story... which I intend to fulfill in the last chapter with a fun surprise.
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Heh, you're right.
I was mostly just going for what felt the most fun, but this really is turning out pretty good.
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Well, honestly, it's always had some dark undertones. These are minors being taken advantage of, after all.
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Oh, there will be threesomes (and more) in a few chapters, though.
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You just have all the fetishes, don't you?
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But they look a lot like ponies. And who's to say they can transform themselves into anything else? Maybe the shapes are too different.
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Yep, that's how it works. Maybe I wasn't clear enough about it, though.
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I'm glad your brain is on bad side's side.
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Glad you're liking it! ^.^
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Oh yes. That is definitely where this is going. Poor Aphin, she's just too shy to make a move.
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Heh, yeah. I was pushing the border a bit there, huh?
6015464 yeah....
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Are you being suggestive?
You have my attention....
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Heh. I had your curiosity; now I have your attention.
Absolutely my favorite clopfic series I've followed in my 3 years of fandomness. Kudos to you!
I just want to see some
analbuzzik on Flivvy happen! But good things come to those who wait I suppose6016574
Do continue...
or is our little banter over?
shame, I was enjoying myself
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To what I understand, Buzzik may lust for Flivvy, but I don't think she really wants him as a changeling. Buzzik will likely switch to enjoying Aphin's presence instead.
And the lesson of the day is...
Never say "it won't fit"
Damnit. Now I can't decide whether I like Aphin of Flivvy more.
Good job m8.
One could say that It's minors being taken adcantage of, but for an example, the age of consent where I live is 15, which means that 'minor' is completely subjective. Oh they're still being taken advantage of feom lur view, but mayve not from theirs. I would make a longer reply, but I'm on my phone.
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That moment you post the same comment 6 times.
6044068 ... I hate Iphones. Seriously, fuck 'em.
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Excellent. ^.^
It sounds like it's having exactly the effect I wanted it to.
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Here's to hoping that 'enjoying yourself' is purely figurative.
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Hm... now that's an idea...
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I did the what now?
You realize I'm writing these out with almost no preparation and publishing them with almost no proofreading, right?
Huh? What did I do that pleases literary readers?
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Brought to you by the letter 'H' and the number 9.
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Thanks! ^.^ I try.
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True. Who's to say when the age of consent for horses is? Much less for colorful cartoon horses. Much less for bugs that imitate colorful cartoon horses.