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"I am the Aloof Hermit, the Lord of the Empty Seat. I am the Alpha and the Omega"
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That was, interesting, I'm going to have to keep an eye on this one.
Intrigued by this, I am. An MLP version of Justice League: Gods and Monsters, I'm curious to see more. Quick question, Why is Twilight in the role of Superman? Wouldn't make more sense if Sunset or Lightning Dust were in this role?
PS, have you put up my Secret Wars: Battle Kingdom for adoption yet?
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I concur. If any should have been Supermare, it would have been Sunset, considering we are talking about an alternate reality here.
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7112495 Clearly you two have forgotten the incident known as Lesson Zero. Plus Superman from Gods and Monsters was actually a total control freak which fits Twilight to a T.
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Uh, not to sound like a complete dumbass (which I probably will because I don't know the plans as to why he made Twilight Supermare) but what does Lesson Zero have to do with this?
7112696 Oh you'll see.
7112653 Well I disagree but you're the and Alphamon_Ouryuken are writing the story.
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Nuuuuuu!!! I can't handle suspense!! I don't wanna wait! But seriously though, this is actually really interesting. If I wasn't working on all my adaptations in progress right now, I'd ask if you guys need help. XD But I'm busy.
Man, I can't wait to see how this plays out. It's really interesting.
Hey there. I have to say great job on the start of this. Excellent work on the exchanges, action, emotional content and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I also like how you stay faithful to the SPIRIT of the source material without following it word for word. I particularly like the almost Alfred-like depiction of Fluttershy (admittedly Alfred is more commonly associated with Batman than Superman, but this IS an alternate universe after all). I'll definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
7113073 Heh..... Fluttershy..... Alfred.
Hey there. Thanks greatly for getting the next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. The exchanges, emotional content, action and future chapter set-up were all quite well done in all the right places. I also really like how you manage to make this your own spin and give the characters a good mixture of their own personalities and those of the characters they portray rather than just following the original shorts word for word. I'll definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration.
Pretty great work on this chapter, very dark yet so very funny too! I like the part how you didn't kill this story's analogue of Brainiac and Harley but instead have them join the team. And it's obvious that Applejack is Wonder-woman.
You know... Just from the description of Wonder Mare in the story description, I realized that Wonder Woman's normal story doesn't work as well in an MLP setting. Almost everyone of importance in Equestria is female. So it's not a 'stallion's world'. Which means Wonder Mare would have less of a story than Wonder Woman.
Nice reference.
Hey there. Again, thanks greatly for getting the next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. Once again, wonderful job on the exchanges, emotional content, action, humor and emotional content in all the right places. I'm definitely going to be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
The safe word should be apples.
Hey there. Thanks very much for getting this next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. I particularly like the touch of apparently giving each of the three new recruits their own stories. Once again, VERY good job on the exchanges, emotional content, action, humor (particularly the "Dexter's Laboratory" Shout Out close to the end of this chapter) and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I have to admit, I AM curious about the identity of this universe's counterpart to the Flash, but I suppose that IS for a later chapter. At any rate, I will definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
Nice use of Joe Chill.
Good work on this chapter. Interesting on having the robot quote pop-culture references. And kudos on brining up the Lazarus Pit. Also is Applejack having sex with Braeburn
?!
Saw that one coming.
Great work on this chapter. We delved into the insanity that is this universe's Pinkie Pie I too want to learn the identity of this Flash.
Oh hi there Derpy.
Pinkie = Harly
RD = Cyborg
Twilight = Supermare
Fluttershy = batman
the trickster = buttons mom
Toyman = Button
am I forgetting someone?
7240280 Applejack = Wonder Woman
Braeburn = Steve Trevor
Rarity = Giganta
Also, Rainbow is actually Brainiac NOT Cyborg, but I can see where you would make that mistake.
Well, not much I can say other than, once again, excellent job on the exchanges, emotional content, action, (dark) humor and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I'm definitely going to be looking forward to the next chapter (especially since I'm curious as to who is going to get the next solo story) as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
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Actually Braeburn is Jonah Hex, hence the scar.
7241366 Okay. Thanks very much for the correction. My apologies for the mistake.
7241405 No worries, I'm just glad I'm getting such positive feedback.
So Gilda is both Ghost Rider and the Flash? Awesome!
7242099 Black Racer, actually; NOT Ghost Rider. Still, it's a logical enough mistake that I would probably make it myself.
Hey there. Thanks very much for getting this next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. Once again, excellent job on the exchanges, emotional content, action and future chapter set-up in all the right places. And I particularly liked your casting for the role of the Flash in this universe.
Now, I have a possible thought for later:
At an appropriate point, somebody of your choice could comment "The only thing that saved Twi's foster big brother from serious injury or worse when her powers started kicking in was the fact he was very good with force fields even then."
That is, of course, assuming you like the idea enough to use it. If not, I profusely apologize for wasting your time and still look forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
Great work!
Great work, Did Apple Bloom get sentto another universe or something?
7252879 Ever hear of Wonder Woman?
7254408 Yes I have heard of Wonder Woman, it was a rhetorical question.
Hey there. Thanks very much for getting the next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. Once again, excellent work on the exchanges, emotional content, action and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I particularly liked the use of this universe's versions of the H.I.V.E. Students, the reference to "the Main Man" two-parter in "Superman: the Animated Series" and the introduction of Red X. I will definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
Great work on this chapter, I love how you incorporated elements from the Teen Titans animated series.Like Comickook, I like all the references. I wonder who is Red X?
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I bet that's a reference to All-Star Superman.
7277010 To be honest, I missed that reference. I was actually referring to the stuff about the collector and Twilight's brief cameo scene.
7277195 Okay.
Hey there. Thanks greatly for getting the next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. As usual, very good job on the exchanges, action, emotional content and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I particularly liked all the little DC Mythology Gags/Shout Outs (most notably the Protocol 52 one [excellent Take That to - certain events in the actual comics] and all the Joker references). In addition, good introduction to this universe's Doom Patrol. Still, I wonder if that fight was a misunderstanding that will be cleared up when both teams end up facing a mutual foe or if this universe's Doom Patrol are super-powered mercenaries.
At any rate, whatever the case might be, I'll definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
Button Mash and his mother came to mind with Toyman and Trickster. Not sure why.
So I was right about Button and Elaina.
Great work, very funny.
7424036 I can assure you..... the answer is yes.
Hoo-boy. Once again, excellent job on the latest chapter. The exchanges, emotional content, action and future chapter set-up were all well done in all the right places. I particularly liked your introduction of this universe's Spike (gives me a feeling the League is going to get AT LEAST ONE new member by the time the adventure is over). And you also did a great job on the introduction to some more new villains. I'll definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
Great work.
Hey there. Not much I can say other than thanks greatly for getting the next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. Once again, excellent job on the action, exchanges, emotional content and future chapter set-up in all the right places (especially since it is setting up MULTIPLE future adventures). I feel bad for Spike concerning what he lost, but at least he seems to have found a good home for the time being. At any rate, I will definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
Not much I can say other than, once again, great job on the exchanges, emotional content, action and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I have to admit I didn't expect Cadance to be in the role of Hippolyta or an older version of Flurry Heart to be in the role of Diana , but I will admit it makes sense under the circumstances. Clever use of Featherweight, too. At any rate, I will definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
Great work on this chapter. Looks like our heroes are going face some very dangerous foes in the future.
Was that a reference to The Batman?
Awesome chapter.
Hey there. Thanks greatly for getting the next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. Once again, excellent job on the exchanges, emotional content, action and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I particularly liked seeing AJ and Bloom working together with not just each other, but also Flurry Heart and Featherweight. And, again, the set-up for multiple future adventures is well done. I'm definitely going to look forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
Great work on this chapter. Nice to see Apple Jack and Apple bloom back together again.