Hey there. Thanks greatly for getting the next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. The exchanges, emotional content, action and future chapter set-up were all quite well done in all the right places. I also really like how you manage to make this your own spin and give the characters a good mixture of their own personalities and those of the characters they portray rather than just following the original shorts word for word. I'll definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration.
Pretty great work on this chapter, very dark yet so very funny too! I like the part how you didn't kill this story's analogue of Brainiac and Harley but instead have them join the team. And it's obvious that Applejack is Wonder-woman.
"Who named Gothamville? REALLY? I'm sorry but who names these places?""Seriously it just feels like that name was half-assed." "We live in a city called MARE-tropolis,"
You know... Just from the description of Wonder Mare in the story description, I realized that Wonder Woman's normal story doesn't work as well in an MLP setting. Almost everyone of importance in Equestria is female. So it's not a 'stallion's world'. Which means Wonder Mare would have less of a story than Wonder Woman.
I know this probably won’t come up but I hope rose is poison ivy and Daisy is, Swamp thing And Lily is the third protector of the green I can’t remember the characters name.
Hey there. Thanks greatly for getting the next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. The exchanges, emotional content, action and future chapter set-up were all quite well done in all the right places. I also really like how you manage to make this your own spin and give the characters a good mixture of their own personalities and those of the characters they portray rather than just following the original shorts word for word. I'll definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration.
Pretty great work on this chapter, very dark yet so very funny too! I like the part how you didn't kill this story's analogue of Brainiac and Harley but instead have them join the team. And it's obvious that Applejack is Wonder-woman.
You know... Just from the description of Wonder Mare in the story description, I realized that Wonder Woman's normal story doesn't work as well in an MLP setting. Almost everyone of importance in Equestria is female. So it's not a 'stallion's world'. Which means Wonder Mare would have less of a story than Wonder Woman.
I know this probably won’t come up but I hope rose is poison ivy and Daisy is, Swamp thing And Lily is the third protector of the green I can’t remember the characters name.