Hello there. Not much I can say other than great job on this chapter. Once again, excellent job on the exchanges, emotional content, action and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I particularly liked the scenes with Rainbow and Gilda (especially Pinkie's butting in) and, yeah, I DO feel a bit bad for AJ. At any rate, I'll definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
Hello there. Not much I can say other than great job on this chapter. Once again, excellent job on the exchanges, emotional content, action and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I particularly liked the scenes with Rainbow and Gilda (especially Pinkie's butting in) and, yeah, I DO feel a bit bad for AJ. At any rate, I'll definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
Once again good work.
this is golden
https://youtu.be/TdHvHony9YA