Not much I can say other than great job on this latest chapter. The exchanges, emotional content, action, humor and future chapter set-ups are all well done in all the right places (especially since the "future chapter set-ups" also do a pretty good job building up possible future adventures). I particularly liked seeing this universe's versions of the Cakes in action and the sweet touch of Spike gaining a robot bodyguard (who, unless I miss my guess, has bits and pieces of Robotmare I's memories, thereby explaining her protectiveness of Spike) and, indeed, to give the (she)-devil her due, it WAS a pretty clever move using Jinx and the others as decoys to distract potential rivals from the real robbery . Of course, I'll definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
Not much I can say other than great job on this latest chapter. The exchanges, emotional content, action, humor and future chapter set-ups are all well done in all the right places (especially since the "future chapter set-ups" also do a pretty good job building up possible future adventures). I particularly liked seeing this universe's versions of the Cakes in action and the sweet touch of Spike gaining a robot bodyguard (who, unless I miss my guess, has bits and pieces of Robotmare I's memories, thereby explaining her protectiveness of Spike) and, indeed, to give the (she)-devil her due, it WAS a pretty clever move using Jinx and the others as decoys to distract potential rivals from the real robbery . Of course, I'll definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
7730086 My bad.
Good job on this chapter.
Great chapter, more Gilda action please.