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6188188 Oh god, I love me some KFC Hotwings!
6188391 Finger-lickin good mmmmmMMM!!!!
Before bringing any war to the gryphon....They really need to deal with internal enemy first...Give Blueblood a tour of the city atop a pike.
What of thy topic choice? Be this conversation pertain to all that is food an such? VERY WELL! I present the Haw Flakes.
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This snack is made from the Crataegus pinnatifida, or the Chinese hawthorn fruit. Though these fruity candies be verily delectable, they are regulated in some countries for containing Ponceau 4R. This news saddens us greatly, for in our youth, we had taken much solace and joy whenever we partook of this reddish-pink treat.
I wonder what fried chicken and lion taste like together... I wonder do anybody eat lions?
6188541 hear hear
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They probably gonna find out he's being controlled. After this a little struggle, exorcism and he is good again.
6188725 He was probably replaced by a changeling, i'm guessing, and most of the nobles are either changelings themselves or controlled by them.
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Blueblood's a freaking Changling!! I had my suspicions after the last chapter, and his assassin being one proves them to be true.
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-And then everyone died. The end.
lol
NO surprising that blue blood is a changeling because it a pretty good plan. Invite nobility to a area, capture them and replace with a changeling and cause problems for celestia and luna
6192311 He killed the bandits because they were going to kill him, that, and he has a hatred for bandits, that simple. As for the Guards, disabling them would result in less consequences then killing them in a foreign land he knows nothing about. As for letting the Princess read his memories, it was a way of earning her trust with greater success, and to prove he was nothing like the last Human.
But this story isn't for everyone. You like Fantasy style worlds with action, romance, and adventure! Then read on. If not? There's other stories that might catch your tastes.
But thanks for telling me your opinion.
Can't wait to see more.
Well now that I'm caught up I will give my verdict.
It's rushed. Not going to sugar coat it. But you are improving as the last few chapters are more easy to follow.
I do admit though that this is a breath of fresh air as far as ideas. Celestia and Luna in sexy battle armor chopping of Gryphons heads. Not to mention having the balls to make your OC form a herd with both princesses. Now all we need is Twilight and his collection will be complete!
You have something good here and I hope you continue to post more chapters. Thank you for making this story.
6193599 Yeah. I admit the start was ... a bit fast, but I'm trying to slow it down.
"Adrian, I would like to introduce you to Chrysalis, Queen of Bitchiness and Changelings"
That's going to be an interesting chapter.
Well seeing at how long, with all the time skips, you gave plenty of time for the tables to start turning.
That was unexpected. Perhaps that'll explain a few things.
Angry Celestia? The gryphon race has just fucked itself over severely.
Even discord isn't this stupid. He may be the god of chaos but he ain't suicidal and he knows where to draw the line. I'm pretty sure that ruining the best day in centuries, for Celestia alone, counts as such.
7459629 He would prank it and make constant jokes and wisecracks though.
It seems stupid to me that anyone would attack equestrian seeing as if celestia or luna felt like it they could just stop the sum or moon over the offending country for a while and either burn them or freeze them.
7972724 True but they would also risk burning/freezing the rest of the world depending on whether it was the sun or moon that stopped.
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well, they could make the sun or the moon pass a little to close to the enemy country, either burning them to ashes or flooding them mercillesly.
In real life, unless you can tell the doctor what kind of snake bit you, there's nothing he can do. Same with poisoned weaponry. Luna should have taken one of the poisoned knives with them.
Great read either way.
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True. But this is pony world. Where they have scanning spells. They can probably just scan him locate and identify the poison and administer antidote
An I get it. Death and protection. A spell whose nature figuratively “kills” protection.