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6559705 Hmmm. I might just do a filler chapter where Discord just turns Adrian into a woman for a day as a prank where His lovers will show him what it's like to be female. (Make overs and dress and such. no clop.) Sound more reasonable to you?
Let the fun Begin.
Heh Cadence being Cadence
6560869 or a Pony Woman need to c his cutiemark
I'm confused, what exactly did the EOH do to Umbra? I might have missed something.
I also spotted a "your" where a "you're" was needed. I don't remember the context. I forgot to copy the sentence with rightclick.
6561295 Umbra was still effected by Luna's magic, thus her altered form. The elements simply put her mana back to it's original state, thus fixing her form. Harmonized it if you will. And I'll look for that error.
EDIT: Fixed :)
poor Adrian he did not know that the Passion Tulip can make pony crazy sex, also are you planning for halloween?
6564025 Nothing for halloween this year. Though last year I did dress up as the grim reaper and stood by my front door like a statue and scare trick or treaters... was fun :D
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Like I said, please do what you want. If it bothers me oh well. Write to please yourself first. Like I said, my issues are my issues.
Besides, there are apparently much more that want to see that anyway, while so far I am the only one that doesn't.
6567807 Hahaha. I had a lol at the end of your comment. But thanks.
6570291 yep
out should be our.
is should be are
I like this chapter, having an update on how everyone is doing was nice. Also having Adrian play with Mavis was adorable, I hope we get more of that. I dont know what a planes runner is so far I'm thinking of a Chokobo. Last time we heard about Spike the Rarity X Blue Blood thing was really bugging him can we get an update on how the little guy is handling it. I get the feeling Sunny is going to reoccur at least once.
These next few things are just my personal opinion so don't mind them.
I have completely forgotten what Mavis looks like, so far I just imagine a baby Shella.
Cadences present to Adrian was pretty lame I get the effort but I feel like she should have picked something more unique.
Planes runner/ Planes walker is that a magic the gathering refrence.
I was looking forward to the inevitable " You did this to me" slap it was glorious. Cadence is next I hope.
Does the Plane Runner have a family member named Reeves?
Hey, what the hell is a plane runner, can somepony help please? I tried Google, but all that came up was some movie. Haaaaalllpp!
6784881 draskos and valen machina it is obvious what the plain runners are, urimas described what they look like in the chapter where adrian, luna and company first traveled to terra i cannot the name of that chapter but what they call plane runners we call ostrich
Definitely thankful for the clop being skipped over the last few times it could have happened. It was honestly just getting repetitive and meaningless. It adds a nice touch to the naturalness of a story like this, but too much and it just gets smutty rather than arty.
This chapter was so heartwarming. I was crying when Mavis said daddy.
It'S THE PILLOW KNIGHTS!!!
Does anyone else get that reference?
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FORWARD FOR THE GLORIOUS CRUSADE FOR TREASURE(candy)!!! AND ALSO TO SAVE THE PRINCESS OF SWEETS!
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I... am unsure how I should feel about that reference... But(t) fuck it! MEEP MEEP!
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If I'm not mistaken, that is a reference to chaotic inks kirin story, though I can't remember it's name for the life of me at the moment.