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man, I feel bad for Shining right now.
Well that happened
Can somebody pickup that phone CAUSE I FUCKING CALLED IT!
So... Cadence join the herd? Who is next? Twilight?
Yeah break up between shining and cadence just no it's so wrong
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DAMNIT!!!! You bet me to it!!!
I say they could have at least shared Cadence. If the women can share a guy, why not the other way around?
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KILLSTEAL = CALLSTEAL
Why couldn't they have just fused the groups? You know, without the homo between bros?
6425793 *click* Hello! I'll have you know that I think everyone saw this, or at least the possibility.
Edit: Only one woman alive understands his sexual preference! ( I think he's Intgra-sexual (excepting the queen of England, of course))
Hmm drunk shining is best shining
6425934 i essentially said the same thing last chapter only to get my first downvote lol
And Cadance is now the Princess of Ironic Love.
Aaaaand the adventures of deus-ex-machina plot convenience Mc alicord magnet continues. No seriously the moment when he got both celestia and luna to be with him I felt this would happen, what's next, twilight, chrysalis, nightmare moon? Also the romance is so rushed that you might as well make it so Discord snaps his talon and they fall in love. Also could Adrian do anything without the deus-ex-machina bullshit. At the start I upvoted this story because of the premise but all of the above give it a downvote from me I just wish I hadn't wasted time reading this.
6426793 I'm sorry to hear that. I don't plan to add anyone else romantically. After the next chapter, Adrian begins his training with Luna and controlling Gaia's power.
It's better this way, now Cadence will be happy and Shining can find someone better for him self. I doubt the captain of the royal guard doesn't have any suitors, although any mares that try to get with Shining are probably going to have to go through Cadence.
Also I can't remember if it has already been said but is Shella Immortal?
6426827 Yup. Changeling Queens can alter their bodies to age or not. So she can make her self older or younger.
6426836 lol Creeeeeeepy......
6426864 Lol. Don't get any ideas... That ain't happening.
Hung out?
I think is hang out unless Im mistaken
6425934 you are right!!!
But you dont find stories or series like that easily, and it can be taken in the bad way
Sorry can't read this any more that last update it's like shiny was strapped in a chair a killed and cadence watched and didn't care
6426991 no, it's more like a Saw3 puzzle trap with a sobbing Cadence holding the gun while Shining pulls the trigger.
Jigsaw: Hello Cadence, Shining Armor. I would like to play a game of hearts...
As much as I'd like shining to have shown more backbone, he handled this maturely thus far.
Cadence? I can only see her as a sort of strange pseudo-slut at this point. The whole root of the issue is that she wanted a foal, but they weren't married? Sound like she was looking for an out to be with Adrian from the start.
As for adrian, at this point I've pretty much lost all respect for him as a hero. Right now it's more of a 'Shining Armor sounds like a more interesting protagonist.' What's more, Adrian being so instantly ready to cave on his morals/honor/hell, even bro-code. I'm rooting for Grogar now.
6427218 except the gun is a 30mm rotary cannon loaded with High Explosive rounds and cadence pulled the trigger
6427397 and it was set to automatically fire for an hour after the trigger was pulled?
6427755 sad ain't it
6427778 little bit while after the first time round it became obvious what was and has happened was going to happen while it didn't need to happen this fast by necessity it was going to happen eventually
6427397 more like Shining pulled it for her.
She still held the gun though.
Any update soon?
6434549 I'm going through it to review and fix any errors I may have missed, might take me a while.
6433256 Either this is a massive bait or you actually feel this way, I'm going to bite and just leave this here. The story is actually pretty great, it's engaging, has a great plot and reads very well. Seems to me more like you're that kind of person who is super over critical about everything and reads a story to find a reason to dislike it and say it's terrible, and while I'd never usually say that your opinion is wrong, the vast majority (like 99%) enjoy the story and don't share your view or criticisms, therefor I can safely say your opinion is wrong.
Have a nice day and enjoy the fic :)
6446386 awwww.....
Angels
6447776 Angels? What Angels?
6449422 oh just one of my musings for the last paragraph
Interesting very interesting
i can't believe cadence join the harem, as they say love last forever, i wonder what twilight think of this?
6451195 She won't be happy, that's for sure.
Writers Block Ebon?
6452956 read my two last blogs.
6452977 Okay... I don't play D&D
6453008 Ahh Good idea man .... On another note Just saw the movie Pixels god damn thats a good movie
I just want to say that this story is one of best I have read and I'm wanting on the edge of my seat. So keep up the good work.
6455966 Thank you.
6456345 Your welcome.
what you planning for thankgiving in two week on monday 12?
6483335 Nothing. Never have before. Just another day to me.
Chapter 53 is currently at 2300 words. Should be ready tomorrow.
so, planning on new chapter if you had something on your mind?