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good battle and now he gonna make the seed grow but i wonder what lie in the next chapter for our hero?
The power of life...
Now THAT'S power.
6524967 Magic
Err... Correct me if i'm wrong, but Mavis is still a little foal right ?
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I really hope they get her out before it start...
6526274 She put her in the baby room... But I guess I forgot to add that.
I love this fics can't wait for the next chapter
Ok, not gonna lie, I love the story. But its getting very repetitive.
Adrian learns some stuff that is powerful. Adrian goes out and battles stuff. Adrian needs to push his limmit of power to the point of near death. Adrian passes out from exhaustion from said limmit breaking. Adrian is asleep for X days. Adrian wakes up and has nookie with one of the girls. Adrian learns new powerful thing.
Wash rince repeat. Dont get me wrong im still gonna read and follow the story. I just wanted to point that out. If you mix in some more side arcs (ex. The short excursion to Terra. That was fun to see) then it will spice up the plot a bit more.
This should be in green
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I only use coloured text when the aspect is talking to them in their heads, not face to face.