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great chapter as always! This story only gets better as it goes on and I'm always anxious to get back home and read!
This elf...
He gives me a bad feeling
6572834 Both errors fixed. Thanks for spotting them.
As for the rest. Spike will have his moment. Mavis does look like Shella, but she will grow up with a different hair style. Sunny Smiles will be back later (Not Clop)
A Plance Runner is kinda like a Chocobo. but more ostrich like in the neck.
Getting 'Emperor Palpatine' vibes from that elf.
You put a 'your' instead of 'you're' right near the end.
6573510 Fixed, thanks.
6573483 Maybe because Adrian had 'unlimited power' and not him.
4-8 days of travel + however long it takes to actually fix Orc land + some form of attack from someone that wants Adrian dead = probably the next chapter?
Wooh!!!!! Another chapter!!!
Elf is dick, elf is asshole.
Please put Twilight Sparkle in your harem PLEASE GOD DAMMIT!
6572908 Don't mean to be that guy but I hope you don't get to caught up writing the new story to finish this one, don't get me wrong I like all of them thus far but you should probably try to focus on one story at a time for the time being.
6595363 I'm working on then next chapter now. I'm doing a chapter each time.
Heh, did you steal names from Warcraft with the Dwarf and Elf?
Speaking of dwarves, you could do a bit better with the dwarven accent. Hell, you could use a good editor in general. Badly, if I were to be honest.
Regardless, I've been enjoying the story.
6614239 .....They also called the Orc Grom(mash) ....Seriously, I doubt he was even trying to hide the influences here.
Suck it you Elven fuck!
6662167 Grommash Hellscream, father of Garrosh Hellscream, Grommash was generally shortened to Grom.
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YEH! FOK OFF YEH SHINY GIT! DEM SHINY ELDARS AR NUTHIN BUT GIBBERIN MILKSOPS! OL' GITSTOMPA CAN TAKE YER FLASHY BITS NO TROB AHAHAHAHAAHH- WAAAAAAAAAAAAGH!
I have to say that that fox girl remind me of the girl from No Game No Life anime show I think her name was Izuna Hatsuse she sounds adorable and I don't mind her going to the MLP world and Fluttershy meeting up with her.
sooo you took all the names from warcraft? Mmm. also, just a refference. when you are ageless you are called an eternal. when you cant die you are immortal. just so you know to rewrite some stuff.
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I actually don't know much at all on Warcraft or lore, so what names did I use that are from Warcraft?
Wooo, Dwarves!! Love dwarves in pretty much anything, ROCK AND STONE BROTHERS!!