Drama bomb

I bet Spike spent 3 hours hiding near that door just to make his grand entrance.

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*Drama button*

Dan Dan Dan

No, really this seems a soap opera, now the gardener is in true a changeling that is the secret brother of Blue Blood that in reality is gay but he love Spike and....

Damn it seriously i hate cliffhangers their my mortal enemies

He just doesn't give up does he?

Saw this coming

So how am I supposed to pronounce Shella's name? I've been thinking it's "she-la" like the Australian slang for 'woman'.

7099397 Shel-la

God damn cliffhangers!
7098991 same man. Cliffhangers are effective but they are annoying as fuck!

Grow up Spike

7099477 i know right?

7099528 eyup!

Urimas used Cliffhanger. It was SUPER effective! But so not wanted. Lol.

ok seriously spike get over it and move on i can see this getting crazy and spike wind up hurting rarity by oing this

*gasp!*

What? Oh yea a comment

Well the chapter is cool and all and... Naaah who am I kidding this chapter is awsm! (Like the whole story)

7099451 why tortoure us with cliffhangers? Why?

7103466 it stimulates inerest in reqding

WHAT THE FUUUUUUUUUUUUUCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK?????????????????? WHY SPIKE IS HERE?

7120905 Thanks :) I am improving the more I write so yeah. I'm also going through the story again fixing errors and adding bits to make it more flavourful.

So yeah...glad I read this after The War Machine, you have a gift for writing great stories! Now if only you would do it more!

7126180 did you go on a reading binge?

7126861 erm, yes and no. Whenever I have freetime during my day I usually read something on FIMFIC. I have a literature oriented mindset (currently activly reading 6 other stories) and my words per minute is stupidly high...also your stories kept me interested.
so yes I binge read in that this was the only story I read, and no in that I still participated in the social activities that us Humans do. (will definitely be on the look-out for future updates!)

Well did see that coming
I mean spike has had a crush on Rarity since the first episode
Anyway great work on this chapter

idea!! urimas you could take adrian to the dragons land maybe to train in an vulcano or stuff you make up and because he is in the fire aspect from he will be seen as a fire god and you know dragon's breath fire so they see him as ther master (and he you know ahas a god in him maybe he will tell them or maybe not) and he befriends the dragon's or at least has them under command /q&a are you a girl or a boy? (likes the story)

7134479 I'm a guy, and thanks for the idea.

7136626 i have a one more idea. now that the goblet of fire episode i had the idea that as a folllowup idea to the other one
that when he meets the king of the dragons because this is before season 6 right?. and the the king offers ember like a sacrifice (you can make stuff up from here) maybe they are trapped some and place and they fall in love by lot's of challenges and talk or she is send back to the castle and stuff happens i would just like princess ember to be in his herd or is it to much?

(i am not good at writting so i don't know if this is a bad i idea. if it is bad then just say so but think of it some smexy time with a dragon)
#diehardisbadatgrammer

7139280 Not expanding his herd anymore, but I still haven't watched season 5 yet... I need to catch up on that.

Not trying to be rude and I understand you have a life to live but dude you upload so slowly

7141343 I'm going through the story to fix errors, so far I've gone through 49 chapters in four days... I'm going as fast as I can.

7149664 Yeah I've noticed that trend while going through it again for errors, After the Fire Aspect chapters I'm going to have a fun Chapter through Mavis and Valiant's eyes.

Not to mention that you can also add some background history from the aspects themselves. So many stories that they can hold, which you can write down. Or perhaps certain tasks that the aspects ask Adrian to do.

7150558 Good idea. Hmm, might get Gaia to tell her story on how Grogar arrived at the Moonglade Forest and the battle between Starswirl and said necromancer.

Spike Nuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!! I know you are upset but please don't ruin this for Rarity

God fucking dammit Spike......

7809674 the guy like shiny things, you can't fault him for it.... yeah... no he fucked up, he's stalker level.

Expected that...yet didn't.