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Silly Luna, we humans can control our anger and hate to a disturbing degree. Unlike ponies who spawn a new terror just by having darker emotions.
6312205 Well Adrian wasn't angry for long, a couple of minutes at least. Then again whatever it is that causes Adrian's eyes to change could be giving him power or energy. Only I know MWAHAHAHAHAAA!
Adrian sees rarity die gets angry eyes changed he's a saiyan
I'd be pissed off as well. I wouldn't even have the cohesion to aim for the heart, just start mauling at his face.
shudders
good chapter i wonder what rarity started in love to Adrian? i just wondering
Didn't like this chapter too much. Not because of bad writing but just because of how irrelevant spike felt; he could have easily been written out entirely with no loss to the narrative of the story. (Not that I'm for that, just pointing out.)
Curious where the story will be taken next.
6312246 and thus is why the 'Word of God' Trope exists.
6313619 Word of God trope? What's that?
6313761 No problem. To each their own.
6313717 This.
6314038 "Doctor, are you sure this will work?!"
"I HAVE NO IDEA!"
6313717 It's a TVTropes thing.
6312854 sounds bloody. Awesome!
6764420 soo Awesome
After coming back to this story after a year or so, and powering though the earlier chapters I feel the need to change my thumbs down to a thumbs up.
"No problem Fluttershy." He replies. "What time is it?"
I love how you write the battle scenes, they fell realistic. Really like this fic, the only thing that annoys me a little is the tense of the fic, I think it would be better if you made it in past tense but then again it’s just a pet peeve of mine.
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I try not to write anime fights. (long drawn out non-sense, why give an enemy time to power up and threaten those around you when can just quickly kill them? That's one of the Saiyans weaknesses, they just let the enemy get strong to satisfy their own need for battle.)
Also I just like stories that make you feel like you're there right then at that moment. also rewriting this for past tense... no thanks xD
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This is a awesome fic. By the way, you are right about what you mentioned about the Saiyans. Hell, when it comes to villains who can just absorb you, you better kill them before they get everybody, because when your the last one standing they'll be to strong for you to stop and you'll just be added to the collection.