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My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
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this story is so awesome :D i love all the magic combos! makes me want to play magicka
Simply amazing, you keep surprising us with your crafty combat scenes.
6133152 I play way to many RPGs and MMOs...
Sadly I only have wizard war's I would like to play the others but I have no money.
My set up is super defense
GOD DAMMIT BLUEBLOOD, AND YOUR CRONIES TOO!!!
My reaction to the scar question, if i was him:
"Eh, light slashing, dont worry."
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Tiss But A Flesh Wound
6133168 There's no such thing as too many rpgs
6574824 JOIN THE GREEK CLUB TODAY! (hah)
I hope story will be better in later chapters.
Currently after 1-10th I must take a break, because its just painful to read.
I this, I that, she that, she this.... I-she-he-Twilight... Did Blah blah, do blah blah....
Really, it's just painful to read with such delivering of the plot. To many rough personal pronouns and 1st POWs.
I hope after a break I'll finish this.
Pal, I love your fighting scenes , with the game mechanics a small explanations that don’t distract you from the action, but you must include everyone when fighting, not only the protagonist. Why would Celestina not protect her ponies? Why would Luna not aid his crush, why did the guards didn’t help Adrian distract the creature. All this little things take away from the story and make some characters feel out of place. Another thing I think you should include is a little bit of mistery when talking about Adrian. No offense but your character is an open book, he tells everything to everyone if they just ask. You know you shouldn’t tell all your secrets an Aces so soon in the story.
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SAME!
He’s already said he’s a battlemage.