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fires
Would have been
6381081 So what!? Everyone knows that it doesn't matter, but its fun.
Diplomacy incoming...
(Or lack thereof)
Bureaucracy at its finest! Bottom doesn't know how to contact the top, but they do have a boss who has a boss who has a boss, and so on. So, maybe another day or two before they get let in because a fifth of the city will be showing up to ask them their business before opening the door.
Well I liked it. Another helping please?
Those bandits should have never messed with them.
How I feel about next update.
Lol
6381293 to what?
6381293 You got an awesome pic!
Spitfire: "What are Dire Wolves?"
Adrian: "Like wolves, only Dire."
Sorry, I had to.
Jasmine hopefully has a kind and loving uncle. Or he could be a total tool, then she gets to go live in Ponyland.
And of course it would be kind of cool if she has mage potential. Adrian's first apprentice.
She's a noble or a blood relative of the king, calling it now.
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I like this story but holy shit why are they so RIDICULOUSLY OP?
6381336 thank you
6381310 that last little bit at the end
6382407 because nobody likes to see main characters die. ruins the story when that happens imo
6383059 Yes but it is necessary to keep a suspenseful story if every one is OP and all there opponents are shit and weak then someone should die. Or at least throw actually POWERFUL enemies at them.
6383194 the same can be said if every enemy is powerful, it gets boring because then you get the cliche anime effect where the enemy is only ever beaten because of some bullshit power up that the main characters come up with last second. I'd much rather read a well balanced story where the characters don't feel weak but there are strong enemies and good battles strewn throughout. not every fight has to be suspenseful
6383247 Not saying that saying that if the chars are way too OP and most if not every single enemy is shit then it is not very fun. I like em where at least the bandits have Lil bit higher numbers and a decently powerful leader that isn't killed in 10 seconds. I also didn't say the WHOLE story had to be suspenseful I simply said that if the enemies were not as weak or some weren't then it would make the battles more suspenseful and therefor more fun to read in my opinion. If most enemies are weak and the rest are more powerful for example a bandit chief. Then that would make it more enjoyable. It's not very balanced now that Adrian has all this stuff. Least limit the beam time like in Magicka WW. The only real challenging enemy Adrian has is Grogan and maybe the king. But Adrian will probably shit on them both. But this author works in mysterious ways I tells ya.
6382407 Because they are trained Guards (Three of them Captains of said Guard) and were fighting thugs with crappy equipment and animals. I plan to have an army of Orcs Attack later. Where Adrian and the others help fight back.
6383286 Oh I got something planned you might enjoy then.
6383463 I see the future man.
what are gonna happen when they meet the king?
STOP! Hammer Time!
Welcome to sophisticated political nonsense. Population, you.
I am somewhat unsure, whether this is a dungeons and dragons type of story or a medieval fantasy. I am so used to stories of modern day humans, going to Equestria, and encountering Twilight and the mane six. I'm still trying to wrap my head around the connection with Starswirl the Bearded. I wonder if Twilight will get the opportunity to meet her idol. I did notice some slight mentions of modern technology. To think that Grogar is a human, also is a stretch.
Were I drinking anything, my tablet would have gotten soaked.
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This cemented the fact he is one of my favorite characters.