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better very much better dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Rainbow_dealwithit.png
much better now part 2????
beter part 2
662288 Thank you.
663812 Tnx and yes I am working on the next chapter now.
664408 I think the next chapter will be a lot more entertaining to read
665707 oh you give me hope
still grammar errors i know someone who can edit it for you just send it to then email account
timohunter@hotmail.com he is very good at grammar hope i helped
ps WAY BETTER cheers for you
oh no a fluttershy sandwich!!!
nice story the ideas are good werewolf thats a new one
but the spelling stuff is pretty jarring
666866 Thank you i while send him a massage.
668723 tnx and yes i know i am trying to make it better. If the one FlintLock is talking about is interested I might have an editor, so it will be better then.>>
665710 I Try
671727 thank you
he did not get the chapter if you can can you send it to him again
672405 sorry about that managed to send it to the wrong person. Whil send it in about 1 hour.
Tnx for telling me
it has been sent
he cant download just copy and paste
your welcome
676119 Tnx
well good luck will be watching
Really interesting story, I hope other chapters come out faster.
920945 Already working on it so around 2 weeks if things go slow hopeful bye the weekend
To see the future and bare your fangs to stop the outcome. I am thumbing this up and hoping for a brighter future. Oh and can you tell me what the crossover is from.
921259 the crossover is werewolf the apocalypse.
com is mising an e or is it jut com/anyway it was good
Hopefully it doesnt take another 2+ months for the next chapter
Interesting if you throw in an encounter with these groups at a later time:
*Timberwolves (Made of wood or not could have a reaction to this character [Though not in a bad way]).
*Diamond Dogs (There is always an encounter with these slaver beasts normally in the darker stories [Release your dark thought here]).
*Wolfmen (Equivalent to Werewolves in Equestria but nothing like your main character or any true werewolf from any other realm [Most are trapped in Tartarus but some could still be free]).
*Wereponies (Just for that true MLP shifters).
Why does this happen when I load good ideas lol.
922439 Hm i not sure what you are pointing at could you give me a bigger hint big time dyslectic her
924291 trying to make one every second weak almost done now
941923 Some of the things you mentioned are going to be in the story at some time i have around 30 chapters preplanned so after that you never know what might pop up.
sorry it toke so long to answer bean having a toothache for a little over a week only got me some antibiotics and Paine killer on Friday so not the most productive lately. but now whit painkillers i am almost finished whit chapter 3. so yay for painkillers
993095 na nothing
993115 ok
993095 Reminds me when I had my wisdom tooth removed. They gave me some antibiotics and tube of gel to rub into the gap every once and awhile (It tasted pretty bad but it helped a little).
993140 almost the same her its my wisdom tooth to but it managed to do something weird to it. smacked my self whit a damn steal pipe on the jaw do to being a grade a
and managed to get it infected or something not sure how i manged it and niter is the dentist. Sow now i must to the dentist on the 14 to get it removed since i need a specialist or something. i sense my cash taking a hike on the 14
I hate having wisdom teeth removed always takes forever.
Yay new chapter, but one thing that needs to be fixed (sorry to put this right after u post) you typed this paragraph twice
so yeah, (didn't finish reading, just decided to put that first before i forget) Also i love the story :D
another.
Is it over?
i love your story but you need to work on your spelling and grammar especially commas
wwoooaa there's alot of repeated paragraphs!!!
not bad
Summary spelling mistakes: whit should be with and the E in equestria should be capitalised.
well, is this the end??
1250893 tnx I did not se that going to fixe it
>>
1252792 1251051 no ther is a lot more coming.
1251214 I know was going to get my editor to fix the chapter but never got a replay, now I see I sent it to the wrong email
1251729 yepp I se it now whil be fixed later today I think.>>
1252585 damn did not se that at all tnx for the heads up.
Tnx to everyone commenting
Oh, it was good. I hope, that this isn't the end.
As a fellow Werewolf the Apocalypse player i can only say Aaaaaawwwwwwyeah.
y u no moar?
1506172 stil going just having overtime at work lately. But I'm almost done with it.
1506776
Replace all instences of "code" with "could". There are a lot of errors. Find a proofreader and be careful of homophones
Be careful of homophones. If you are using a phone with autocorrect to type this, stop. Use a comp
Y u no moar!?!?
This is some good stuff, i beg of thee, update please.
UP DATE NOW please
Hi sorry every one. Working ful time and being a full time student has destroyed all free time since November.
But I started the next chapter againe last weakend hopefully il get it done bye Sunday. Finally home stretch for exams taking time off next 2 weaks of studding
2404590 sorry for the long time used.2269845>>1964413 sorry you 2 also
Your story is so amazing that no matter how poor the grammar can be in some places it doesn't matter... YOU ARE AMAZING
That was beautiful.
the ending of this story brought tears to my eyes I never cry but that was just so hearth breaking
braveo