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You should put the fiction part in italic so people know its not the real story and dont just go <<Ewwww its bad>>
this was fun
Heh heh, cute. A pretty silly but fun concept. I enjoyed it. The ending could've been a little snappier instead of dragging out, but it was still sweet.
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5677090 I thought about that, but part of the joke is that you don't know it's Trixie writing it until later XD
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That it was Trixie's work didn't surprise me; the writing was too terrible to make it anything else. I just thought it was Trixie feeling lonely and using some wishful thinking.s
Love it!
Hmm, fascinating development. It's very interesting to see Twilight voice her opinion on the subject matter, as it were. She did get a bit more mean-spirited about it than I would have liked, but that's a matter of personal opinion more than anything, and the bit at the end more than made up for it - very sweet.
I like it.
5704609 Out of character and stupid, Moonie. Not to be taken seriously, or canon at all, you know. ;)
5704615 Well, yes, I'm familiar with that. (That's what most of my stories are all about, after all.) But I had to say something that looks deep and profound or I lose my Pretentious And Artistic License. I do have a reputation to uphold, after all.
I hate to be a hater but it felt like it was a childish wrigting or you trying to replacte trixy's way of speeking
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It might do to put a break or something between Trixies fic and when it switches to reality. Makes for easier reading. Also this is adorable. On to chapter 2!
That was funny chapter that is. The first chapter or the main one was very cute. I'm glad that spike gave up on the definition of Lesbians there, too funny All in all it was very nicely wrote.
This feels like it's a sequel to Blood Boil.
Good stuff though