You should put the fiction part in italic so people know its not the real story and dont just go <<Ewwww its bad>>

this was fun

Heh heh, cute. A pretty silly but fun concept. I enjoyed it. The ending could've been a little snappier instead of dragging out, but it was still sweet.

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5677090 I thought about that, but part of the joke is that you don't know it's Trixie writing it until later XD

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That it was Trixie's work didn't surprise me; the writing was too terrible to make it anything else. I just thought it was Trixie feeling lonely and using some wishful thinking.s

Love it!

I hate to be a hater but it felt like it was a childish wrigting or you trying to replacte trixy's way of speeking

It might do to put a break or something between Trixies fic and when it switches to reality. Makes for easier reading. Also this is adorable. On to chapter 2!